The changeling hives have always warred with each other to cull the weak. With Twilight Sparkle's announcement still echoing with the other hives, it is time once again to separate the chaff from the wheat.
Greetings all. While my current editors are great, time marches on for all, and one has had to bow out due to other matters eating his time. So I am putting this call out for someone with some skill at both proofing and pre-reading/brainstorming to fill in for him.
Since I have been a bit quiet, I figured all of you should get an update. I am working on a new fic, as I mentioned somewhere before... i’m going to be pre-writing several chapters and then posting them on a weekly basis once they are all complete.
Once those start, I will be returning to work on Beyond Equestria, and try to wrap that up.
So after some consideration from comments and my "pain in the ass" editor*, I have decided to unpublish the latest chapter and write a new one to happen before it.
I assume that that's RD in front of the cave, and that the stuff in front of her as well as coming out of the cave are drones? If so, that's a much bigger size difference than I was expecting.
twilight looks PISSED! and it appears she is opening a black hole with the coronal mass ejections from the black core.... also, the look on RD's face makes me think something along the lines of "oh crap... what the heck is twilight about to do!"
i am not sure what is going on with twilight's tale... is it turning into stars or something?
the massive amount of drones in the front of the cave, and what appears to be a cloud of black drones on the right.... this is going to be an externally good fight.
You know, I always wondered if your version of twilight might have one more form and if she lost the chance to become an Alicorn or simply that it was buried and waiting for her Queen changeling aspects to stabilize?
Looks like a lot is going on in this picture. But it makes me wondered just how much will happen in the changeling homelands before Twilight's and Rainbowdash's hive can respond.
2602933 Now thatI have seen a larger versian of the picture I have to admit that I don't like. I like the backgrounds, but the characters look strange. The only one I can recognize, without having read your stories, is Chrysalis. This could be a picture that turns readers off your story.
So I take it Twilight is the one in the air grabbing the bolt with her magic.
But is that Rainbowdash in back of her on the ground?
Edit: I'm guessing this is a pictures Twilight and Rainbowdash fighting Chrystalis and her sisters while to armies of changelings fight in the background. Rather big epic fight scene.
... That is a very odd angle to portray Twily from, and I'm not even sure that it is Twily I'm looking at. I reckon that this was meant to be a wallpaper and it just doesn't do as well when shrunk down like this.
Edit: I forgot the verdict. It's an interesting picture but I don't think it'd do well as cover art.
2603093 Less problematic for others than for me. I have an extremely mild form of dyslexia that has me occasionally swapping adjacent letters, so I normally read very carefully. This is the first time in months that I've read something too quick and ended up fumbling the order.
I have to admit, the realistic portrayal of mlp characters has always been a bit off-putting to me. The cuteness is lost to the realism, but to each there own, right?
Regardless of what I personally like, I can't help but say it's a great piece and should server wonderfully as a cover art.
I like it except one thing... What is up with Twilight's mane & tail? the coloring alone is incredibly weird with those stars, but even more so, the shape makes it look like she has an extra set of butterfly wings coming out of her neck, combined with the shape of her magic looking like a long antenae, she looks like a weird moth with a massive abdomen instead.
I am to guess that the one of the left is Rainbow, the one on the above right left-side is Fluttershy, Chrysalis would be the one on the lower right. And I have no idea who the one on the top right. (NOTE: I still have to read the story, going to do that soon)
I definitely should not click the link to Tulip's profile. I have enough of that propaganda and warmongering in everyday life in Russia. Pony fanfiction is my safe haven in all craziness and hate of this year. Usually. Not this time.
Is that... Twilight? She looks like an angry demi-god.
Trying to figure out the other 3 changelings on the right. I hope that Fluttershy is alright and that the changeling is just very similar looking to her.
Do you have a link to a larger picture?
Actually, how about they don't tell us
Not sure characters are to little for cover art and lack of some symbolism what is great for coverart.
And chrysalis looks strange its hard to say where is her legs and rest of body.
its that rarity and applejack, and nightmare mutant twilight?
rd looks interesting, gay like hell because of rainbow wings(joke...or maybe?)
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You know exactly what everyone will do.
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done, its on the bottom.
I assume that that's RD in front of the cave, and that the stuff in front of her as well as coming out of the cave are drones? If so, that's a much bigger size difference than I was expecting.
twilight looks PISSED! and it appears she is opening a black hole with the coronal mass ejections from the black core....
also, the look on RD's face makes me think something along the lines of "oh crap... what the heck is twilight about to do!"
i am not sure what is going on with twilight's tale... is it turning into stars or something?
the massive amount of drones in the front of the cave, and what appears to be a cloud of black drones on the right.... this is going to be an externally good fight.
can't wait to read the story!
It looks so weird, Rainbow Dash looks like a green goblin to me
Looks pretty good.
You know, I always wondered if your version of twilight might have one more form and if she lost the chance to become an Alicorn or simply that it was buried and waiting for her Queen changeling aspects to stabilize?
Looks like a lot is going on in this picture. But it makes me wondered just how much will happen in the changeling homelands before Twilight's and Rainbowdash's hive can respond.
2602933 Now thatI have seen a larger versian of the picture I have to admit that I don't like. I like the backgrounds, but the characters look strange. The only one I can recognize, without having read your stories, is Chrysalis. This could be a picture that turns readers off your story.
I initially read this as new CToH cover, and was confused. Looks good after rereading the acronym.
2603062 hmmm, that could be problematic
So I take it Twilight is the one in the air grabbing the bolt with her magic.
But is that Rainbowdash in back of her on the ground?
Edit: I'm guessing this is a pictures Twilight and Rainbowdash fighting Chrystalis and her sisters while to armies of changelings fight in the background. Rather big epic fight scene.
... That is a very odd angle to portray Twily from, and I'm not even sure that it is Twily I'm looking at. I reckon that this was meant to be a wallpaper and it just doesn't do as well when shrunk down like this.
Edit: I forgot the verdict. It's an interesting picture but I don't think it'd do well as cover art.
2603093 Less problematic for others than for me. I have an extremely mild form of dyslexia that has me occasionally swapping adjacent letters, so I normally read very carefully. This is the first time in months that I've read something too quick and ended up fumbling the order.
I have to admit, the realistic portrayal of mlp characters has always been a bit off-putting to me. The cuteness is lost to the realism, but to each there own, right?
Regardless of what I personally like, I can't help but say it's a great piece and should server wonderfully as a cover art.
I think it is awesome!!! I have always liked the predatory look that Tulip's changelings sport. *goes to give a fav* Kudos on new cover art yay!
That is rather badass... fitting for the story :3
I like it except one thing... What is up with Twilight's mane & tail? the coloring alone is incredibly weird with those stars, but even more so, the shape makes it look like she has an extra set of butterfly wings coming out of her neck, combined with the shape of her magic looking like a long antenae, she looks like a weird moth with a massive abdomen instead.
but yeah, otherwise it's great!
I guess the upper two are Chrysalis' sisters, but I cannot unthink the idea that the left one is Fluttershy.
Twilight uses pulsar star-like magic. Cool.
I am to guess that the one of the left is Rainbow, the one on the above right left-side is Fluttershy, Chrysalis would be the one on the lower right. And I have no idea who the one on the top right. (NOTE: I still have to read the story, going to do that soon)
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What symbolism did you expect?
She has black body, ofc its monotonous, i tried to fix it with glowing edges, but it didnt work.
Well i may say that she looks childish with such coloration. As pony and as ling to. Rainbow is symbol of childhood and happyness.
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Egh...i tried to make it look like sky at the sunset...
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She is horseinsect. Isnt that weird?
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We all imagine our own bugs.
Fandom produced tons of different Twilight Sparkle`s. You saw there one if them.
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Oh. You have found this implication.
2604827 not really the story established them and I'm basing my look of them of ov your pictures but Rainbow is just... It's probably cuz she is in the shadow, when i look at here this picture pops up in my head it's probably the hairstyle
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I definitely should not click the link to Tulip's profile. I have enough of that propaganda and warmongering in everyday life in Russia. Pony fanfiction is my safe haven in all craziness and hate of this year. Usually. Not this time.
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Is that... Twilight? She looks like an angry demi-god.
Trying to figure out the other 3 changelings on the right. I hope that Fluttershy is alright and that the changeling is just very similar looking to her.