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Vinylpon3


Well I like to mix songs and do short stories because it's fun to do. And just to make this clear I'm a guy so hopefully there might not be any confusion.

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    Mlp: Hitory of Equestria

    history of Equestria
    Author: Vinyl_the_lost_pony





    For the reader: when you read this I hope you enjoy this read. I hope you the reader enjoy this short story. And this is my first story so there could be some light errors.... Thank you....

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  • 489 weeks
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    Well guys I'm new to FIMFiction but I'm not new to MLP forums I love that website and the people there. I do have one question though. I have a story typed down on my iPad in which im using right now, but I'm clueless on how I can post it. somepony help a brony out....

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Nov
9th
2014

Mlp: Hitory of Equestria · 3:49am Nov 9th, 2014

history of Equestria
Author: Vinyl_the_lost_pony





For the reader: when you read this I hope you enjoy this read. I hope you the reader enjoy this short story. And this is my first story so there could be some light errors.... Thank you....



Prologue: before the Mane six where formed and before Princess Celestia along with Princess Luna. They took back Equestria along with the Crystal Empire. Therefore this is the past, therefore can't be changed! And somepony's believe King Sombra is still here.... In the Crystal empire.... His curse will forever live on..... But something will stop this strange magic.....









Chapter 1: The beginning
(Twilight and Celestia are in Canterlot)

Twilight: (reading) Wow, I can't believe King Sombra had control for that long!

(Celestia enters)

Celestia: Twilight my dearest student. I heard you where reading about King Sombra.

Twilight: Oh yes I have. is it true about how you and Luna defeated him?
Celestia: Yes we.... (turns away) use the elements....
Celestia: What a shame.
Twilight: It must of been hard because it says he was very dark but.... (looks at book) it says Luna defeated him... But with what?...
Celestia: He's not the only one who controls the darkness ya know.
Twilight: Yes princess I know.
Twilight: Uhh didn't you want to see me?
Celestia: Oh right yes, it was about the elements... We way have found a trace of them but where not sure.
Twilight: I see...
Celestia: Follow me twilight.
Twilight: (follows)

(Celestia and Twilight are headed to the tree of harmony but twilight doesn't know that)

Celestia: Here we are twilight.
Twilight: Wait... What's this...I've read about this! It's the tree of harmony!
Celestia: Correct but I'm not sure how we would find the elements...
Twilight: Wait aren't they gone?
Celestia: According to this tree they ain't.
Twilight: Well... Hugh hmmm led me take a look.
Celestia: Be carful.
Twilight: (walks around the tree)
Twilight: Hmm nothing's here Celestia
Celestia: I'm going to head off I will see you soon twilight...
Twilight: Ok Celestia.

(Celestia exits)
(Twilight exits) (Day ends)










Chapter 2: King sombra's returns
Derpy: ......
Dr. Hooves: (time travels into ponyville) (walks out of TARTIS) well blast I'm here again! Oh well... Wait I think I know why hmm something tragic is going to happen.....
Derpy: oh my gosh Dr. your back!
Dr. Hooves: oh right yes time travel is still difficult hmmm but anyway how have you been?
Derpy: good I guess....
Derpy: so why did you come back?
Dr. Hooves: honestly because something bad is going to happen....
Derpy: I see. Do you know what it might be?
Dr. Hooves: not to sure derpy.....
(4 hours later)
(Twilight, Celestia, and Luna are in Canterlot)

Twilight: well what are we going to do discord is back and we don't have the elements.
Luna: I don't know twilight but discord is just a small bug we can step on.
Twilight: what do you mean by that?
Luna: .... Well (Celestia enters) honestly he's not as easy as King Sombra.
Celestia: she's right twilight...discord is nothing compared to King Sombra.
Twilight: but we don't have the elements.
Celestia and Luna: you know twilight the element magic is in you....
And the elements are here....
(Ground shakes)
Twilight: what's going on!
Celestia and Luna: twilight you must go find the elements! Remember the elements are inside all of us!!! Go now!!!
Twilight: ok...(runs out of Canterlot)
(Canterlot fell apart)
(Day ends)








Chapter 3: Misery in Canterlot


Celestia: King Sombra leave at once!
Luna: you have no clue you weak soul!
King Sombra: *evil laugh* no you have no clue of the power I have!

(3 hours layer)....

Twilight: I hope there ok....
Twilight: I don't know how I'm going to find the elements again!?

(Twilight enters Manehattan)

Twilight: hopefully rarity is here...

(Twilight is walking around manehatten)

Rarity: oh darling that dress is Devine!
Twilight: rarity?!, rarity!?
Rarity: what who's that?
Twilight: rarity?
Rarity: yes?
Twilight: I need you to come with me to (whispers) Equestria is in trouble and the elements are needed please help.
Rarity: I see ok I will help.
Twilight: Thank you rarity.
Rarity: wait who are you? How do you know my name?
Twilight: my name is twilight and we used to be friends remember?
Rarity: *gets a flashback* oh my oh my we need to get the mane 6 again! Together!
Twilight: I missed you rarity.
Rarity: I did also darling.

(Twilight and rarity headed to Clousdayle)

Twilight: now rarity look in the sky because we all now know rainbow dash is a flyer haha.
Rarity: ok twilight.

(Rarity and twilight looks for rainbow dash)

Rarity and twilight: RAINBOW DASH!!!!

(Rainbow dash heard her name)

Rainbow dash: uhh hello
Twilight: rainbow dash it's me twilight! You know your friend!
Twilight: please rainbow dash remember!
Rainbow dash: oh I remember twilight I was messing with ya haha.
Twilight: wait what?
Rainbow dash: yeah my memory wasn't erased.
Twilight: hmmm ok then...so you already know what do you?
Rainbow dash: yeah I kinda heard you and plus I know what to do (rainbow dash flies down to twilight) let's go!
Rarity: great yes let's go.

(Rarity, Twilight, and Rainbow Dash are headed to the evergreen forest to get Fluttershy)

Rarity: why are we here twilight?
Twilight and Rainbow Dash: we have to get fluttershy.
Rarity: oh...right.
Twilight: look there's her house.
Rainbow Dash: (quickly zooms to fluttershy's door and breaks the door down)
Are you home Fluttershy?!
Fluttershy: uhh yes... Umm my door?
Rainbow Dash: quick Fluttershy do you know us?!
Fluttershy: uhh yes your my friends....
Twilight: why weren't you oh never mind that we have to get the elements Fluttershy!
Fluttershy: oh right... Um ok....
Twilight: ok Fluttershy




What do you think so far? Oh it's still in the Edie mode and I have to atleast get 5 chapters lol but anyway I know this is the wrong place to post this but who cares lol

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Comments ( 2 )

I have a tip for you. Stories can't be posted to the site in script format. Try giving it some dialogue and action scenes so that you can have it approved.

Well this is my first thing so yeH and I want it in a script...

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