Nov
3rd
2014
A Home for a Mary Sue (Revamp) · 4:22am Nov 3rd, 2014
So just saying, I'll be restarting from chapter 3. I've never done this for a story before but I believe this one could use a lot of work with the plot to make it less...well, random. Although that's what it's meant to be, I think I could do a lot better with it than I have seeing as almost everything in it consists of just random daily things I wrote down due to boredom. So yea, I'll be leaving only the first three chapters up and getting back to it, except it'll be more organized and actually have a consistent plot with a planned ending. Gonna try to keep it kid friendly to unlike QATS. This seems like one of those stories that just needs to be retold imho.
Personally I enjoyed the random nature of the original. Certainly it had some problems; it sometimes took me a couple of reads to really comprehend what was happening. But it had a certain appeal in that sense that made me and a friend roll with laughter when we read it. But hey, if you think you can do better, I'll certainly look forward to see what you come up with this time around
I am very upset you decided to remove this story
but guess fucking what?
https://web.archive.org/web/20141112170544/http://www.fimfiction.net/story/204951/10/a-home-for-a-marysue/chapter-10-there-must-always-be-a-meeting-and-49-chapters-later
i found your damn fic again, and i'm able to download the shit.