Regarding Farmer's Hospitality...AGAIN! · 12:48pm Nov 1st, 2014
After re-reading chapter seven, I have decided to modify the "flow" of the story by adding a to a few chapters in between seven and eight. Chap Seven leaves a HUGE gap of up to ten months and I intend to modify it and fill that gap in, as leaving THAT MUCH of a time frame of such an important time for them unoccupied is simply lazy and wasteful of a lot of opportunities in my opinion.
I understand that this is breaking an existing time-line and that's generally a massive writing faux-pas / a major writing no-no....but there's a good reason I left this story on 'incomplete' status; so that way I can change and mold it to something I can feel happy and satisfied with.
Sorry for the LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG wait for new chapters, but I really do hope that this decision will improve the existing story beyond what it is, as what it is to me currently is lacking.
Good to hear. I'll admit that I felt that mostly skipping over the pregnancy was a bit of a let down.