New Fic of the Day Review- Seeing Rainbows · 8:57pm Oct 27th, 2014
Well... This is interesting. A WWE fic. As you'll all find out right now, I hate pro wrestling like this, as it's fake, so you know this one was a pain for me to sit through. Seeing Rainbows is what Im guessing is a story, boy that word is used a lot around here now days, that fails at even the most basic elements of story telling. First off, how the fuck did Rainbow appear on the bus? It's never explained, which is always a great sign right...... Next, even though I know nothing about WWE, I do know that each of the wrestlers have their own personality, which isn't shown.p here. Actually, there's no character development or basic characterization shown here at all, which leads to them being bland, static characters. He could have used the successful fight that the WWE had in order to show their personalities, but that would have been a couple of hundred more words at the least. Hey, on the bright side at least this author using decent grammar and spelling!
Grade: 9/100 F (dislike).
To be honest, I was kinda going through a bit of rust at this point, so I could've been able to maybe detail a bit of it, but I wasn't one to write big-ass 10,000-word chapters.
Also, I'm surprised this came up on the very first day it was uploaded (also the second day since signing up)