Let's Gather Around the Campfire... Mistakes.. · 1:18am Oct 21st, 2014
Ok so as most of you know my new story was approved yesterday. Problem I wrote the story at like 8:00 and finished around 10:00 so I missed a lot of thing's I wanted to put in chapter 1 of this story. so here are what I forgot to add in or didn't describe very well
1. Fright Light the Unicorn. I missed a few thing's with this one. Like who she is she was a unicorn and the most important part. I FORGOT TO SAY IT WAS HER BIRTHDAY!! In the story she got her name not only for all the night terror's she get's but because she was born on Nightmare Night. It slipped my mind when making this chapter and soon after the story is finished I will add this.
2. The Teacher's talk. I was going to have a part when Harpy Yard was gonna go into the teachers lounge and hear awful thing's about the C.C. from the teachers and Threatens to report them. Here's what it was supposed to be.
Harpy Yard always loved seeing them run of with glee it gives her meaning to push them to their fullest. It was after school and she walked into the teacher's lounge for an after school nightmare night party for staff. when she got there she heard the murmur of her fellow staff about the five kids.
"I still can't believe the principal didn't expel them this time!" the teacher known as Sugar Plum said.
"Expel? I can't believe they aren't in prison!" A teacher by the name of Digital Muse said.
"Oh please you're all going to easy on them... They belong in the asylum!" One by the name of Cold Cola said. Harpy was horrified hearing the awful things they were saying.
"HOW DARE YOU SPEAK OF THEM LIKE THAT?!" Harpy yelled to them. They were shocked that the meanest teacher said that. "THOSE KIDS HAVE HAD HORRIBLE LIVES AND YOU'RE ALL TALKING CRAP ABOUT THEM?!" She continued. "YOU KNOW I THOUGHT OUT OF EVERYONE IN THIS TOWN YOU WOULD UNDERSTAND THEM BUT OF COURSE NONE OF YOU IDIOT'S CAN FEEL THE PAIN THEY HAVE GONE THROUGH! ALL YOU CAN CARE ABOUT IS YOUR OWN bleepING SELFS!" SHe stormed out of the room with such anger she had never felt.
"Woah, Glad she's not a unicorn!" Cold said.
"Dude. Shut up!"
3. The setting. I said that it took place near Winsome Falls. My mistake I meant IN Winsome falls!
OK that's all I can think of for now so check out the story bye!!