Sugar, Cubed: now with less word crime · 5:43am Oct 10th, 2014
For those of you following along at home (or secretly watching through my living room window), I just updated the text to Sugar, Cubed. The changes aren't major. It's mainly grammatical nits that I'm ashamed I didn't catch before. There is an extra line or three in the final chapter, purely to add (a little) more closure. Is it enough? That I don't know.
What I do know is that I've been bitten by the editing bug, and as a result I'm going to run through everything I've written and check for the same telltale errors. I swear I used to be better at this grammar thing, once upon a time… probably long before MLP entered my life.
Oh yeah, and Sugar, Cubed briefly hit the featured box! I'm very happy that people enjoyed what I wrote; especially chapter three. I probably spent more time on that one than the rest, just in hopes of doing justice to Pa's character. His role in chapter three is… complicated. My earlier drafts missed the mark entirely, and I have Horizon to thank for calling out that mistake, and plenty of others.
