Thinking of doing a rewrite

So I recently watched the movie Flyboys in my Aerospace class, and remembered my story "Where am I?" After reading through the comments, I've decided to do just what people wanted; make it longer, and polish it up. I may continue it as well, as far as I can. Also, on the topic of My Little Amnesia, that is officially on Hiatus. I just have no more drive for it. So if anything get's posted, it will be a better version of Where am I?