The Bravest of Writers

So, six hours after submitting and my newest story has an overwhelming six thumbs down. I almost feel proud.

I'm not bothered by the thumbs downs one bit, though. I realize the readers have yet to comment on what it is I'm doing wrong (or even if I am doing anything wrong).

So I'm not going to stop writing The Bravest of Fillies. Until somepony had the guts to speak up and tell me WHY I have six thumbs down already, I see no reason to stop writing. This is my story and my vision, and I'm not going to let anypony tell me otherwise.

So have at it. Tell me, if you are so keen on trying to break me down, at least have the spine to speak up and tell me why you find my story underwhelming.