Aug
22nd
2014
Here is an Update · 10:48pm Aug 22nd, 2014
Reviewed the second chapter of lyra_lover777's story. I am really enjoying her series and looking forward to reading more in the future.
The grammar on the first chapter of my story has been fixed. My thanks goes out to benxlabs for helping me with it.
Currently chapter 08 is still a work in progress as it will be containing more action then some of my previous chapters (or at least I hope so). However, things are more difficult when you create a new place and you have to think about how you want all the action to go. As I have stated for I know how I want things to go it is the journey of getting my characters there that is difficult.
If you are having trouble imagining out your world, I would suggest drawing a rough map out on paper. That way, you can get a good feel of where everything is, and also figure out where you have gaps in your own knowledge. If you yourself don't know where something is, how can you expect to convey where it is to your reader?
2392320 I am mostly referring to the interior of the Obelisk. To some extent I wanted it to have a labyrinth like feel to it. This in turn means I actually have to think it out more in my head in a logical manner. After all if you are being chased by something you would most likely choose the most efficient way to escape your assailant.
That is my issue right now.
2392576 try a maze generator XD
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Hmmm... I will have to look into that.