Some stuff · 8:28am Jun 10th, 2012
Well, I first have to thank everypony for your feedback on "Heated"! I also have to thank you for the advice, to which I'm glad for because it has helped me to decide that I should have expanded. Yeah, like I did say a couple times before, it was meant to be a one-shot. Just the one chapter! But I'm glad I eventually decided to add more to it.
So that is what I'm doing! There's more to come, and maybe there isn't huge epic drama, I do hope to still deliver something good.
As you've noticed, since chapter one, I have cut back on the sexiness a bit. That's my intention! Give some sex, pull it back, put some more, pull it back...and so forth. So yes, while sexual activity IS an overtone in the story, you've seen in the story and from my statements that I am also focusing on characterization and the emotions. So it's not just a mindless clopfic. I'm glad it's managed to work out this way and that you all came to see what I'd been doing, so thank you so much for that!
I don't think there's anything worth spoiling. You all probably are predicting how I'm going to end it, anyway. XD
Some things I noticed you all speculating was somepony walking in on them. Oftentimes, suggested that it will be Twilight.
I'll be honest. I'm none too sure. I will have a scene like that, but I don't know who I may let walk in on them.
So, discuss! Talk about who you think should walk in on them and why! In the end, yes, it is my decision, but sometimes I like to look to readers for a little input.
And that's about it! There's more to come, so stay tuned! Thank you very much again, everypony! :D
I honestly don't know who I would rather walk in on them, but I can imagine the reactions for each.
Twilight and Applejack would probably react mostly the same. I would expect after walking in they would pretty much go "Oh! Umm... I'll just... I'll just be going now," before shooting off. Alternatively, they wouldnt move from the spot but no one would make eye contact.
Rarity would probably faint.
Pinkie Pie could have many different reactions. She could emulate AJ and TS. Or, she wouldn't be put off at all, and would realise that what she had walked in on was why both RD and FS were glowing. In a slightly more silly universe, she may ask to join in too.
Or maybe her reaction would be entirely different.
Actually, having written all that, I've decided to vote for Pinkie walking in on them. She has a much wider range of potential reactions than the others in my mind.
Give some sex, pull it back, put some more, pull it back...and so forth
So in other words ... you're teasing us.
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Like i said before Pinkie would be interesting. She might know close to nothing on the subject, i could imagine her tilte her head and ask "What are you two doing? Oooo is this a game!? CAN I PLAY!? CAN I CAN I? Well this happening Fluttershy and Dash would be panicking and Dash will eventually manage to push her out. Pinkie would sigh for not being allowed to play and would proceed to go ask random ponies about it untill she finds and asked The rest of the main 6. Then they handle it in there own unique ways
Pinkie Pie would probably be confused and be like "you two are having a party without me?" or "is it a game? CAN I JOIN?!!!" or something.
Rarity would either be like WTF? Or faint.
Applejack would probably walk in, see them,a nd slowly back out...
Twilight would either be like Rarity and be like "What the hell are you two doing?!!!" or just like, stand there and stare with RD and Fluttershy not noticing her until they're uhh... Done...
Derpy. Derpy should walk in on them. Or one of the Crusaders, for maximum awkward. XD
Nah, but seriously, I'd go with either Pinkie (for hilarity) or Twi.
Really whoever walks in on them doesn't make a difference becuae aside from maybe AJ any of them walkin' in would end up in the other five finding out. And then, given that they are all such good friends, no matter what angle the situation is originally presented from there friendship would warrant an explanation from the pegasi's point of view. After which, i'm sure the rest of the mane six would understand, especially given that the sex's distributions in Equestria is skewed like, five to one with females being the majority, such relations would be common. To end, anyone could come in, it doesn't really matter.
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Thanks for the input! You're right, Pinkie would be the funniest! XD And Rarity, yes, she would so faint!
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XD Yes, I am teasing a little. But that's also to make you guys want it even more!
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As much as I wouldn't want to make Pinkie that dumb (she's smarter than we think ;) ), I think I can write that off as her not quite knowing how the mechanics of two females having sex work (which even I myself was ignorant of years ago!), and that she thinks it's a game. XDDD Oh, that would definitely be funny!!
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But I guess it would be a silly one-liner for her!
True, she probably WOULD say "Can I join?!", but I admit that makes me slightly hesitant because I also don't want to hurt the PinkieDash or PinkieShy or PinkieFlutterDash fans.
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The Crusaders WOULD be funny...XD But I don't know how the readers will feel about children walking in on sex. Oh my gosh, Derpy!! XDDD That would just be silly!
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That's pretty true! And it will end up as such, somepony walks in, it's all awkward, then eventually they explain what's going on, and the rest of the cast understand and are supportive of them. XD But it's just fun to play with the possibilities, I guess.
Thank you all so much for your input!
Nono wait. ....CELESTIA walks in on them. Derp! :B Cue Molestia grin. XD
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XDD Noooo, I don't do that.
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*giggles* I was kidding anyway. Gotta admit it'd be funny though. Maybe a weird dream sequence one of them has. XD
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It's just that I'm one of the few fans who actually likes her character and tries to treat her with respect.
XD I see what you're saying, but nah. I never did like the whole Molestia thing, anyway. Sorry.
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Oh don't get me wrong, I love Celestia and all. She's not like that in my headcannon either. I just find the Molestia and Trollestia versions funny sometimes. I view them as alternate versions of her from another reality or something. =P
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Oh, okay. XD Well that's refreshing to hear! I just personally don't find them funny, really. XD
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Well hey, I'm a pony Tumblr addict, so I enjoy all kinds of variations on the show's characters. I follow half a dozen different Rainbow Dashes, Twilights, Pinkies, etc. And in my own story (that I really need to get back to writing, heh...
) the mane 6 end up meeting different versions of themselves. I'm an alternate universe nut, what can I say? xp
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And that's okay, you do whatever works for you!