Aug
10th
2014
A Better Ending · 4:00am Aug 10th, 2014
So a lot of you have said that the ending to Why Does He Love Me? felt way too quick and abrupt. And you know what, I agree! The reason why is that I'm going to be super busy this week from hanging out with my friends and moving to a new college where I'll be living without my parents for the first time EVER! (Nervous as hell) So I'm not exactly in the writing mood.....
Still though, the story deserves a better ending and I'll add some stuff in the next few days and let you know when I'm done.
thx dude and I'm looking forward to seeing the changes
Sweet.
Thanks Deep.
It was a bit rushed—but still good.
I'm glad you're still working on it. And it's awesome that you're going to a new school too!
Yep, seems I was late to this knowledge. To be honest, when I visited your page after I read the story and finished the comment, I... let's say I had a facepalm of a moment. Next time, I'll be sure to check blogs before I put on a full critique. Sorry about that.
But I am looking forward to the change.
I'm glad to hear that you still have plans for the story; marking it as "Complete" might have been a mistake though.
But, hey, mistakes were made, and the story will still be completed. I can live with that
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Lol its cool
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Lol I've already been to too many parties lately. It will be interesting to see if I can survive on my own.
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Thanks dude!
How you been by the way? Haven't talked to you in a while.
2364770 I'm well. Just working, playing Battlefront ll, and spending time with my friends in my single's ward.
How have you been?
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You know just stressing out about my life goals and plans for future badassery. Usual teen stuff.
What's a singles ward?
2368190 Me too, though my plans are pretty much laid out for now.
A single's ward is a ward (congregation, or what have you) in the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints that young, unmarried adults attend (except for the Bishop and his counselors and their spouses, who make up the leadership). It's technically called a young single adult ward. I think... thirty-five, or maybe less, is the oldest age. It's a good place to get to be around more young people! We have activities, games, parties, campouts, and church (duh). Of course, one can still go to a "family ward" if they want to. They're more common here in Utah where there is a higher density of "Mormons", and thus enough young single adults in an area for a whole ward.
Comprehensive enough for you?
I know when most people hear "ward" they think of a hospital.