My Short Poem Called "My Reflection in Motion" · 8:55am Aug 6th, 2014
I know this is a blog post board, but I want to share my short poem with you guys. I'm in my 3rd year of college now. When I was in 9th grade, I walked outside when the moon was shining brightly and the I idea came to me and I wanted to write this. This poem I created represent Princess Luna going through the darkness she suffering. I hope you guys enjoy this and thank you for reading.
My Reflection in Motion
When I see the ocean,
Suddenly my reflection is seen in motion,
When I see the ocean waves,
I suddenly see a maze in motion,
In the maze of darkness,
Suddenly I feel alone, scare,
And full of anger of myself,
Where I'm in chain for the sins I committed,
I deserve the punishment for the things I did wrong,
There are so many corners,
I can't contain myself from the lonely darkness of punishment,
I'm lost in the maze of thoughts of shame,
Regarding myself,
Then suddenly there was light shining above me,
That broke the darkness,
And shatter it into pieces,
The chain was lifted off of me,
And I was out of,
The maze of thoughts of shame,
Then I could see my reflection in motion
Of no shamelessness again.
By: Rachel B.
What a lovely poem!
And thanks for favoriting my TwiLuna story! What did you enjoy about reading it?
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I love everything about and thank you for liking my poem, you can use it if you want to, and as long you credit it.
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I would love to, but that would be against the rules. You can't copy someone's work, even if given permission.
Then again... I could always re-imagine it and adapt it to fit the planned sequel of the fic you read. Credit will still be given, of course.
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Ah I see, silly me I forgot about that rule, sorry about that.
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No need for apologies. We all make mistakes!
However, I saw on your page of comments that you make book covers for free. That's totally awesome, and I like the style your art is in. Specifically, I love the shading of this: https://littlewashu45.deviantart.com/art/HorseQuestionOne-and-LavenderQuartz-s-Art-Request-683934393.
I wanted to know if you'd be interested in making a piece similar to it with Luna and Twilight kissing, Luna in a tux and Twilight in a dress. If it's not beyond your capability, I wanted to ask if you could make it a bit shady, the only light stemming from an overhead full moon, preferably in color if you could. Bonus points for having completely darkened silhouettes of ponies sitting in chairs in the background.
It's all up to you whether you'd like to do it or not, but I'd be honored to place your art as cover for my story.
Just try to leave out the watermark in the center. Please?
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Sure I don't mind, for the art request, it will be awhile till I get to it.
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Of course. I don't want to rush an artist.
Get back to me if you get around to it!
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Hello there Tropical Applejack, :3 how are you doing? Sorry for the long late reply lol been so busy, just wanted to let you know I'm starting to work on your request right now, I will try to get it done as soon as possible.
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I thank you very much. This is so nice of you!
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you are welcome :3