So Let's Talk About Kissing Scenes · 12:36am Jul 26th, 2014
Chapter 11 is finally updated. I decided to put within this chapter something that has been requested for in the comments in the story.
A Kiss Scene.
So what? Well, it can be particularly hard to write a kissing scene when...you've never...been kissed...before.
Ahem. So, yeah.
How'd I do? Does it sound, I dunno, like a dreamy, mushy, slightly too perfect kiss scene as intended? Or does it sound like an inexperienced teenager wrote it?
And to my followers and blog readers, a brohoof for you!
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~MintyJoy
ADORBS! It was pretty good for someone who hasn't been kissed before so conglaturations!
Took what I've read from Stargirl from Jerry Spinelli and a few shipfics I've read. Thanks!