Another review: Hearts of Class

I didn't think I would be reviewing another story, but when you receive a request from the author to review their story it's almost hard to say no. I've also been requested to review this in a professional manner, so let's dive right into: Hearts of Class I: Blossoming Courtship.

Please note that I'm going to review the first installment of the story, don't know if I'll review the sequel as well.

The premise of this story is, Sweetie Belle and Spike are being sent to a private school in Canterlot by Rarity and Twilight called Canterlot School for Equestria's Gifted. They enjoy each others' company, find love, and their is a line between their academic and relationship success.

We begin this chapter with Rarity trying to wake up Sweetie Belle, and Spike informing her that Twilight sent him to the same school that she will be attending. That sums up the first chapter if you ask me.

Now we move on to the next chapter, A Long and Eventful Journey.

Spike and Sweetie Belle have a conversation, then Spike accidentally burps fire at a mare's face. Then Spike beats up one of the seniors, we are introduced to a new character in the story named Lyvia. They take the train and they arrive at the school.

Throughout this story, we see Spike and Sweetie Belle meet more characters, grow throughout the story, and see if they could survive in a school environment at first. To save time, I enjoyed this story I'm not gonna lie.

Lyvia, Sweetie Belle, and Spike were expelled by the headmaster of the school for dating and it is clearly against the rules. That's my only gripe with this story, I understand that conflict is needed to advance the story but I never knew that a prestigious school would not tolerate romance.

So that was, Hearts of Class I: Blossoming Courtship. I'd say that this story is an enjoyable read to me, though I can see why the author removed the Rarity tag from the story since she wasn't seen once at all.

Pros:
The premise
The romance
Using the tags to your advantage
The story's execution

Cons:
Grammar
The story overall

Verdict: Needs work, but I still recommend it. Maybe the sequel will shed more light on the subject, anyway I'll see you all later!