Chaotic reads My Little Unicorn: Magic is Believing · 6:41pm Jul 9th, 2014
I saw one of the writers that I follow read this story, so I decided to take a quick look at it.
A few moments later...
A story with 370 dislikes and counting was actually approved, a shocking realization if you ask me. The author doesn't even like MLP, let alone knows how to write a cohesive story without raising a few eyebrows. You have your typical alicorn main character and a three-horned alicorn ruler, burying your own grave I can see that early in the story, I had to stop reading at the beginning to avoid losing any brain cells.
The writing is decent enough to at least be legible, but the story just feels like you're bashing your head on your keyboard to write words, without any clear indication of actually typing on the keyboard.
As a caution to all readers who wish to read a story like this, be prepared to criticize. See you guys next time!
Before I forget, here's a link to the abomination of a story. Kill it with fire and tread lightly.
You're crazy! Few who have ventured through that fic have lived to tell the tale.
2269643 Somehow I survived, hopefully a story like this never comes back... again!
2269665 We can call it that, it felt so pointless.
2269693 Oh, I didn't burn my house yet.
I'll edit the blog and post the link in it. 
2269696 Edited the blog, click the link and may Celestia be with you.
*Keeps eye bleach close*
...Ready for criticisim.
2269706 Trust me, you'll see once you read it.
2269711 Keep it close and never let it go, onward to the abomination story!
2269798 I knew that would be your reaction.
2269805 I only read the beginning, no mere mortal can handle more.
2269814 Good luck on reading the rest.
I
The Nostalgia Critic!! 
2270248 Same here.
Oh my Luna....the Celestio thing had me in stiches!! I haven't laughed that long in a loooong time.
In a completely unrelated note...my brother probably thinks I've gone insane, thanks for that Chaotic.
But, seriously it made my night! :D
2270490 You're welcome, Midnight.
I didn't think that my blog would define insanity in many forms today. 
2270494 Goddess, I'm still smirking about it!
...this makes me feel sooo much better about my own work! Every time I feel down about it, I'll just come back to this little blog ;)
Thanks again XD
2270501
I always aim to please. 
2270506 My brother probably thinks I'm insane now XD
lol jk.
Is it bad that my friend wants to read it just to see how awful it is?
2271854 Not bad at all, I'd be curious too.
2272385 lol
2272438 Everything is going according to plan.
2272444 Heh. Hey, I'd be grateful if you reviewed one of my stories, since you seem to like them so much! I'd really like your feedback ;)
2272961 I would love to, I'll see if I can bring out my inner reviewer. Which story would you like me to review?
2272970 Well....hmm how about I'm So Sorry? It's one of my most favored/liked fics anyways....and I was hoping you could do my new fic Harmony's End when it's got some more of the plot and stuff going.
Was hoping you could review my OCs and the story
2273004 I'll see if I can review it in my next blog, hopefully I know what I'm doing.
If you want me to, maybe I could offer my services.
2273018 What services do you offer?
2273048 Well if you need help on writing your story, I guess I could volunteer.
2273074 Help is always appreciated on my end!!
2273102 Looks like we have to pull out the old collaboration skills again.
I'm in!
2273125 Huzzah! The fics have been doubled!!
2273154 I know that it will go so well.
Then, you can message me after so that we can celebrate. 
2273175 Yay!! :D
do you want me to message you the doc for the story folder? Can you do that?
2273191 You can message me for the story folder, first I'm going to review your story.
2273197 Oki doki loki :D I'll give it to you since we're going to work on it anyways ^^'
(plz don't be too rough on me!!
heh jking, jking.)
2273201 I would never be rough on you, unless it is needed.
2273210 lol thanks! (and I don't mean to brag but I don't think this will be that bad a fic, if it is gonna be bad at all....) ^^' It might be a bit rushed, but it is just the prologue...we shall flesh it out much more!
2273241 I'm almost done with the review, you'll see the verdict I give it.
2273264 oh wow, that was fast!! Also check out my page, I pimped it out yo, pft lol y am I a gagnster?
(Cause I am one in my heart...lol jk
)
If you guessed who I referenced than you get a cookie XD
2273309 If only I knew the reference, we can get started on the story if you want.
2273319 lol its from a youtuber XD (I forget his name lol derp) sure thing! Actually, u can start chapter one if you'd like. Think of a cool title and stuff (I shall pm you on what I want to happen.) but yeah, go crazy :D
2273354 Okay then.
First, I need permission for the link.
2273362 oh derp, kk no prob!
2273376 Yay!
2273380 Hopefully that link will work XD stupid me....
2273384 It works, now I'll get to work.
Wow, that looks bad...
2534131 It sure is.