It's time to edit. · 3:42am Jun 21st, 2014
Dumb version: So, I try to follow the original while adding my own ideas and I down right fuk it up.
So I thank you guys for reminding me that this is my story now and I'm allowed to do whatever the fuk I want with it.
Smart version: When I adopted this story, I thought I should try my best to follow the original while adding my own ideas to it. Thanks to the guys that had problems with the story, I now realize that this is my story now and it is time I start writing it as my own instead as the original (which was slightly rushed) Thank you for reading.
Basic version: Chapter 1 is going under a quick rewrite.
Now ussally I leave you guys to have a heart attack but I'm currently on the iPad right now so......yeah. No heart attacks this time.