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TheHiddenOne


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  • 512 weeks
    An Epiphany

    I'll admit, I'm not the best writer out in the world. In fact, I think I'd call myself one of the worst. It's just that, I have these great ideas (at least, in my head) that don't translate well onto paper. I try my hardest, but my stories just end up coming short.

    So, I've decided to overhaul my stories.

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  • 633 weeks
    First Impressions

    Well, after the first couple hours, I've had fourty-two hits and two comments. Technically three, but I had to get rid of one of mine as it contained unintentional spoilers. And no one likes spoilers!

    Not bad for right now, but I'm hopeful there will be more!

    I will be working on the next chapter of The Silent Guardian throughout the week and hopefully I'll have it up by Saturday.

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  • 633 weeks
    Blog Fail Fix

    Map of Equestia

    click on World Map

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  • 633 weeks
    Location, Location, Location!

    To anyone wanting to know where I got the names for, you can find it here:

    The guy who made this map is a GENIUS! Please, someone tell me his name so I can credit him properly!

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Jun
5th
2014

An Epiphany · 4:42am Jun 5th, 2014

I'll admit, I'm not the best writer out in the world. In fact, I think I'd call myself one of the worst. It's just that, I have these great ideas (at least, in my head) that don't translate well onto paper. I try my hardest, but my stories just end up coming short.

So, I've decided to overhaul my stories.

Fire Emblem: Equestria was, and still is, an ambitious story, one that had been in my head for quite some time. Unfortunately, what ended up happening was a train wreck, mostly because I couldn't get myself to STOP and look over my work!

Don't get me wrong, I'm not going to delete it, just re-work it under a different title. And THIS time, I swear, it will be better. Of course, a little help would be great... I need help with characterization. So many other stories out there, like Past Sins and Loyal2Luna's Doctor Who series have such great characters, and they do such a great job endearing them to their audience! I wanted to reach that level, and I still do, but I'm gonna need a lot of help to get there.

As for Of Spirits and Swords... I have another idea for that one. Basically, it was a plot bunny that wouldn't go away, and was eating away at me until I finally ended up putting fingers to keyboard and submitted it as another story. So, I'm going to start a collection of stories and plots, write a first chapter to each of them, and if the readers want to see one of these ideas put into a full-length story, I'll do it!

As for Gentlemen of Fortune, I'm going to take off the second chapter and just leave it as a one-shot, at least for the forseeable future. I honestly think I should have kept it that way to begin with, seeing as I never really thought of a plot line for it. Perhaps when I finally get the mess that was Fire Emblem: Equestria under control, I'll go back to it.

Really, I'd LOVE some help with it... would anyone want to give this struggling, and frankly, poor author some help?

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please do not remove the 2nd chapter of gentlemen of fortune! plenty are waiting for more! idk how much help I can be, I'm not that good with spelling..

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