May
25th
2014
Random Ideas #5/#6 · 4:19am May 25th, 2014
Starswirl knew time spells.
[Insert Mirror Pool Here, along with a casual disregard over cloning blues]
Fusion of Doctor Who and Ponies created, none of that "Gallopfrey" cheating crap.
Changelings don't act like incompetent idiots and infiltrate society from birth. Families are created, families are hidden away. Put everyone in dreamworlds called "Matrix". Luna/NMM comes back and is horrified.
Unfortunately, the document with these is sitting lonesomely in my gDocs reading like a drugged up idiot danced on a keyboard.
The best writers are drugged up idiots. Don't hesitate — go for it.
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http://www.fimfiction.net/story/167547/incomplete-fusion
This makes the urge to continue very lacking.
And I quote: "A Temple Run crossover with less plot got better ratios than this"
2143383 Eh. Maybe you just got unlucky with a couple of vote-bombers. Or maybe it really does suck that much. I looked at the first chapter and indeed it was quite... meh.
If you want me to do a detailed review for you, I'd be happy to over PM. But either way, if you don't continue there is a 100% chance you will not improve.