update · 9:33pm May 19th, 2014
Hello , everypony neokiva here. With an update.
First things, first. I have completed the first draft of chapter 5 of the experiment. Wewt! Definitely got that draft done faster than the last chapter.
Now we are almost 5 chapters done, i wish to hear your honest thoughts.
So comment in here if you noticed any issues. However there are some provisos.
First No one line comments please don't waste your and my time when im trying to learn, elaborate expand upon what you want to say.
Second i am not a veteran writer im new to this save for poetry do not expect me to know what your babling on about when your using jargon.
Third critique does not mean you have to be brutal just be clear and concise and most of all polite.
Fourth read alextraza's guide to critiqueing.
Fifth don't expect me to listen, if your rude.
Thank you for reading and i hope to better myself so i can provide better stories for those that read them.
