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TacticalRainboom


I wrote some stories for you. I hope you enjoy them.

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  • 449 weeks
    A quick Slamjam postmortem note

    So, the creator of one of the OCs I wrote about just about flipped his lid at me because I gave his character a gay shipping story, ruining his message of platonic bromance and emotionally vulnerable heterosexual dudes.

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  • 450 weeks
    Part 1: Poetry

    “But I hate poetry” well that’s because you’re doing it wrong. A poem of the type that we were told to write in this class is just a short, condensed piece of work that shows who you are and what you do as a writer.

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  • 451 weeks
    Lesson 0: Learn the rules before you break them

    I know full well that I'm talking down to a lot of people in this post--my excuse is that writing it out is also a way for me to refresh the lessons in my own mind. Story tags are because I plan to go back and "grade myself" based on my own advice as i write these.

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  • 452 weeks
    All is right in ponydom

    I know, I said I would do a thing, and then I didn't.

    I will. I promise. Next post.

    But first, I need to share this with you: a friend has informed me that One Terrible Writer has posted all of his stories, previously thought to be lost forever, on fanfiction.net.

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  • 454 weeks
    Knighty HATES him! Honolulu-area baker reveals how to improve your writing with 3 simple rules!

    I’ve seen it a few times, and you probably have too: people will say stuff along the lines of “I bet this person took a community college course in creative writing and now they think they're so great.” It’s a very resonant insult for classists like me. Besides, it’s rooted in fact: the level of literacy needed to pass community college courses in this town is miserably low.

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May
16th
2014

The Ultimate Fate of Nightmare Moon · 3:38am May 16th, 2014

The Rainbow of Light has been shown to be pretty damn unpredictable in what it decides to do with bad guys.

-Killed some old G1 villains
-Turned Discord to stone
-Turned Discord into stone again in round 2
-Sent Luna to the moon
-Pretty much left Luna alone in round 2
-Took away Sunset Shimmer's god-powers (totally counts)
-Sent Tirek to Tartarus in round 2, when it killed him in round 1

Celestia reached out to the sky with a soft weave of magic, even though after so many weeks of trying she knew that it was a meaningless effort. She had called upon both new techniques and ancient powers, but however she begged the sky to reveal its secrets, the sky would not respond.

It seemed that there might never be an answer to the question: When Princess Celestia used the Elements of Harmony to save Equestria, what became of Princess Luna?

I wrote this as part of a story that connects the pilot and the season 4 opener with the idea of a citizens' uprising calling themselves the Lunar Republic. WAIT NO DON'T UNFOLLOW ME YET. I'm just saying that I wish I had been a little more heavy-handed with the bit that I quoted, because the implication is actually pretty interesting.

Celestia didn't know what she was aiming at her sister. There are plenty of fanfics about how lonely it was for Celestia after the banishment--but how many fanfics address the idea that Celestia had no idea what she was about to do? Or worse--what if Celestia had no way of knowing for the next thousand years whether or not she had just killed Luna? This also applies to when she sneakily pointed Twilight toward them in the pilot, and when she asked Twilight to use them on Chrysalis.

Now I'm gonna go back to thinking of fanciful traditional pegasus names for stuff, and figuring out how to deal with the changes introduced by the s4 finale.

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Celestia didn't know what she was aiming at her sister.

That... is amazing. Like so many solid ideas, it's blatantly obvious... once someone has pointed it out! I am so stealing this.

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