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  • 162 weeks
    Sweetolebob18 injury

    Sweetolebob18 was a top proof-reader of Tails or Innocence and Tails of Sacrefice. Two months ago, he had a car accident, and now he require 6500 $ for knee operation, which he can't affod.

    I can't afford to help myself, but if any of you is capable of assisting him in anyway, I am certain he will be most grateful.

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    2 comments · 1,187 views
  • 190 weeks
    Chapter 15 - Two small scene changes

    Hello everyone. Just wanted to inform you that based on feedback from "RebelRogue12" and with his help, I altered two scenes.

    It is nothing much, but thought I should inform you regardless. Added stuff is marked in bold:

    Scene one:

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    1 comments · 742 views
  • 191 weeks
    Scene change - Celestia's motivation - Feedback needed

    Hello all fans of this story. Due to high controversy regarding Celestia's actions and received feedback, I decided to expand on Celestia's scene to give better reasoning behind her actions.

    Sure, what she did is still a desperate and bold move, but I hope what I added will make it more understandeable and improve quality of the story.

    Added scene is marked in bold:

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    4 comments · 453 views
  • 191 weeks
    Scene change - Kyuubi's injury - Feedback needed

    Hello everyone.

    Considering the feedback, I came to conclusion that the scene where Shining Armor injured Kyuubi seemed more harsh and more intentional than I intended, so I decided to add minor changes.
    Also, it was pointed out to me that tails don't bleed, so I decided to adress it as well.

    Here is the altered scene, changed as marked in bold:

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    6 comments · 339 views
  • 195 weeks
    I appologize for the delay in updating

    Greetings all readers and fans of "Tails of Innocence"

    I would like to appologize for this long delay in updating this story. There are two reasons behind it:
    1) Chapter 9 felt rushed to me and I had difficulty figuring out how to expand on it in a satisfying way, but I finally succeded. I can only hope it will be enough.

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May
5th
2014

What "Celestia's Tiny Student" sidestory you would love to read? (Part2) · 10:27am May 5th, 2014

I know that I said I will wait at least few days for the voting to end, but time is candy, and since two story ideas got ahead of the rest of them, I decided to organize another voting.

Now, do not get me wrong. The previous voting is still going on: Link - http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/319053/what-celestias-tiny-student-sidestory-you-would-love-to-read
So if you haven't voted or would like to check the newly posted ideas and vote again, please do, because scores can always change.

In case if the scores in previous voting would not change, and ideas presented here would still be ahead. This voting will decide the winner.

Sidestory idea number 4: Adventures of Tiny Princess ( or “Celestia’s Tiny Adventures )
Story idea: This story is written from Celestia’s perspective and tell about the few adventures she had with her student while being tiny.
Story take place:

After Chapter 12 - Celestia’s Tiny Adventure
Before Chapter 14 - Home Visit.

This idea got 9 upvotes and 0 downvotes.

Sidestory idea number 6: My Little Medic (or “My Little Wonderbolts Medic)
Story idea: After becoming Wonderbolts medic, Twilight is spending few months doing her best to fulfil her job while she try to gain Wonderbolts trust. This story focus on how Spitfire, Soarin and Twilight’s friend grew as well as Twiny introducing Spitfire and Soarin to Fancy Pants and Blueblood.

Story take place:
After Chapter 20 - Camping Trip
Before Chapter 21 - Best Wishes

This idea got 7 upvotes and 0 downvotes.

The rest of ideas got 1-4, so unless any of them do not reach at least 8 upvotes, we will need to choice between those two.

Please vote on sidestory to "Celestia's Tiny Student" you would prefer to read and downvoting story you do not want to read is permitted. The one that gets most upvotes minus downvotes I will write for you all, so go ahead and decide: Do you want to read about tiny Celestia adventuring with her student while watching the world from her perspective, or you would prefer to read how Twiny is working as a medic for the Wonderbolts as the bonds of friendship between her, Soarin and Spitfire grow, alongside with how Blueblood and Fancy Pants were introduced to them. .

Lets the best story idea win.

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Sidestory idea number 4: Adventures of Tiny Princess ( or “Celestia’s Tiny Adventures )

Story idea: This story is written from Celestia’s perspective and tell about the few adventures she had with her student while being tiny as she see the world from her student's perspective and get her soft body into shape.

Story take place:
After Chapter 12 - Celestia’s Tiny Adventure
Before Chapter 14 - Home Visit.

Upvote this sidestory if you would like to read it. Downvote if you really do not like the idea.

Sidestory idea number 6: My Little Medic (or “My Little Wonderbolts Medic)

Story idea: After becoming Wonderbolts medic, Twilight is spending few months doing her best to fulfil her job while she try to gain Wonderbolts trust. This story focus on how Spitfire, Soarin and Twilight’s friend grew as well as Twiny introducing Spitfire and Soarin to Fancy Pants and Blueblood.

Story take place:

After Chapter 20 - Camping Trip
Before Chapter 21 - Best Wishes

Upvote this sidestory if you would like to read it. Downvote if you really do not like the idea.
This is the final voting, so unless any of other ideas will somehow catch up with those two in the other blog (which I doubt), the winner will be decided here.

Both are good. Thinking I'm more leaning toward the wonderbolt idea tho. Celestia is already pretty developed and I remember wanting more wonderbolt arc when reading this, so think that ones got my vote

2080166 good point I voted for the other because it would develop her more a little more, but I am fine with both also

Wonderbolts idea! My little medic sounds fun, and there's lots of potential for development and conflict with the way the wonderbolts have been set up in this world, as she works on winning them all over..

Celestia's Tiny Adventure. I know it's a bit late, but better than never, right? :twilightblush:

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This voting is over, My Little Medic won.

If you would like to vote on short/long description or give your own idea what you would like to read in the story, feel free to post it here:
Link - http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/319841/my-little-medic-final-voting

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