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May
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help with a single paragraph · 2:17pm May 1st, 2014

(Hope dies when it won’t come true)( this part is set around a broken promise that the master made master made to the slave, which is what gave birth to their friendship)
I'm at a partially emotionally charged and very important paragraph in my story.
the gist is that there is a slave and a master. the master has become very attached to the slave and vowed to see to it that she is returned to her family. Unfortunately, the master has been ordered by his king to sell the slave.
How do i approach this? its first person so thoughts are very important. currently all I have him thinking at the moment is "Is this all i can do? can i do something more?".
please comment or PM me with ideas

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Thank you, i just needed some time to think! problem resolved

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