Chapters 1-4 commentary and Chapter 5 name and summary. · 5:49pm Dec 21st, 2011
So the last chapter of The Return of Humanity is up and I'm already getting even more positive feedback from my readers. Thanks for the views, ratings and comments folks. Huzzah!
Anyways, The Return of Humanity was a lot longer than I originally intended. It expanded from a planned two chapters (and prologue) to three chapters with over 15k words. I also apologize for any and all typo's that I wasn't able to catch during rereading. Spell check is a blessing, but auto-correct is a pain when writing for Applejack.
On a totally unrelated note, AJ is going to call humans "sugarcane" as apposed to "sugarcube". Because we are all tall and skinny. Let's go with that.
So that story arc is finished and our protagonist has the name we will all know him by for the rest of the story. When I first developed this character, Lanternlight was the first name that popped into my head. It just fit too well not to use.
Upcoming Chapter 5, to be posted sometime this week, after I get Xmas shopping done.
Home is Where the Hearth is: Lanternlight needs a place to call home, but he can't seem to find the right location for his house.
That's all from me. Keep rocking guys!
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UUUUUUGGGGGHHHHH. I can't wait to read more. I know that the holidays are crazy, so I suppose I'll just have to read everything over and over again. ^_^