Looking for Some Writing Help · 3:57am Mar 31st, 2014
As always, I've got more ideas running through my head than I should, but I want some help if you guys don't mind.
I'm thinking of finally tackling the equally popular yet infamous section of "Human in Equestria" fanfic and I was wondering if anyone out there could give me some pointers or willing to outright help me write and plan the fanfic. Anyway, here's the main plot (which is not set in stone):
Finally fed up with her constant pestering Twilight Sparkle decides to use her magic, not to mention her new Princess powers, to finally shut up Lyra Heatrstings once and for all and disprove the existence of humans. Unfortunately for her, when she finally casts a spell to bring a "human" to equestrian, it actually works, and because she was sure it wouldn't, she has no idea how to send him back. Twilight informs the Princesses about what she did and the presence of the human… and they are not happy, immediately arresting him. As it turns out humans did exist on Equestria once, a resourceful, violent and war prone race that gave all the other races, even the dragons, a run for their money. They vanished around the beginning of Discord's rule and the Sisters decided to strike their existence from the history books.
However, this human is different from what they remember, far lest violent and much more cultured, they decide to cautiously test his interactions with the kingdom, seeing if they can truly get him to buy into the Harmony they've based their rule on. As for the human himself, he decides to take this one-way-trip to this new world as a clean slate to be whoever he wants. But can he handle to scrutinizing eyes of the Sisters, the fear and contempt from the many ponies around him, and adjusting to a society not meant of his kind? And let's not forget that some factions are looking to make use of the member of this "legendary warrior race" for their own purposes.
So, compliments, critiques, ideas, volunteers? Anything you got guys.
