Status

well 2 chapters in and so far its gotten more thumbs up then down. i appreciate those who Favorited my story and those who commented with their criticisms. i want this story to be as enjoyable as possible and as you can see i'm not that experienced so the more advice an criticisms the better. also i now have an editor who is currently working on chapter 2. ounce thats done i'll send her chapter 3 which i have completed. i may even go back an give the first two chapters titles. with that said thank you to those who have taken the time to read my fic.