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Man Of War


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  • 258 weeks
    Chapter 7 edits

    Alright guys, thanks to my new editor, I have now completed a rather large edit of Chapter 7. The chapter as a whole should read much better now, and with fewer mistakes... hopefully. Nothing has really been changed in the Chapter's story itself though so it's more or less the same like I said, just a bit easier to read now and a part or two makes a bit more since. The previous chapters will be

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  • 265 weeks
    So far so good.

    ... Or at least as good as could be expected from me being gone for so long. I've gone through the comments and will definitely be doing some revisions on this chapter. Thanks for all the new favorites, likes, and watches you have given me, and to those that have began to find the story boring... I can sympathize with that. I just cleared out my unread chapter list of all the stories I had lost

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    2 comments · 193 views
  • 290 weeks
    Info on next chapter.

    Yeah, ummm... sorry for being so dead around here for so long but the story is not dead or anything and will really start hammering down on it in a little over a week from now. Just ordered a new laptop and now just got to wait for it to be built and shipped. Anywho, pony on y'all!

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  • 305 weeks
    PLEASE READ... um, if you can. What is y'all's opinion?

    As the title up there says, I am just wanting to know y'all's opinion on something.

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    3 comments · 226 views
  • 308 weeks
    A long overdue gift!


    Heh-heh, so, sorry for being away for so long, but like the title says I have a gift I think y'all might enjoy. I'll explain when you see it on here tomorrow, or today, what ever the case. Until then good night/good morning!

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Chapter 7 edits · 5:54am Mar 4th, 2014

Alright guys, thanks to my new editor, I have now completed a rather large edit of Chapter 7. The chapter as a whole should read much better now, and with fewer mistakes... hopefully. Nothing has really been changed in the Chapter's story itself though so it's more or less the same like I said, just a bit easier to read now and a part or two makes a bit more since. The previous chapters will be getting more or less the same treatment over time. So, now to get back to writing on Chapter 8!

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Comments ( 7 )

oh this! you edited a chapter of it? Any major changes?

1894621
Nothing really big, I just took a sledge hammer to the walls of text. :pinkiecrazy: And I added in a few minor details, such as reactions to the armor and stuff like that. Nothing that really changes the chapter's actuall story though.

1894635
Okay then. Glad to know you're putting some tlc into it though. ^_^

1894637
Yeah, I know. I'm just glad someone was kind enough to offer their time and help, as you have seen with the other chapters, it's... kinda dicey.

1894643
Yep. I won't lie about that.

Thumbs-up! Even the though the additions are fairly minor, I'm glad to see them. They help flesh out the chapter and scenes. :eeyup:

Edits for chapter 2 will be along in a week or so.

1895425
Thank ya. Ill get to work soon on the first.

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