Feb
5th
2014
About those Flutterhulk rewrites.... · 5:01am Feb 5th, 2014
all I'm going to do is add the following:
Fluttershy tinkering in a home-made lab before work, which is then discovered by a janitor at the motel, who phones it in and attracts the attention of the Equestrian government, which leads to her capture.
And then, an off-hand mention of her being in biology class during one of her flashbacks.
And then, some little bits of dialogue for when she and Cheerilee are together in Cheerilee's lab.
Everything else, Hoofcuff, Tree Flower and all, will remain exactly the same, with the additional, minor detail of Hoofcuff being an agent of NEIGHS, which explains how NEIGHS was able to find Fluttershy in the first place.
That's it.
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1798316 Don't worry, the plot remains exactly the same, and the chapters remain exactly the same.
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I know. I just wanted a chance to use that gif. It's your story, bruddah. You keep writing and I'll keep reading.
Cool
Works for me.
I wouldn't have minded seeing seeing Posey as Flutter's mom, but it's no biggie.
1798330 In all fairness, it is a cool gif.
Hmmm, well then I wish you the best of luck on your rewrite.
Thanks, now I have a reason to re-read Flutterhulk.
1799211 Well, it's probably only going to amount to a total of MAYBE a 1000 words.
I figured that Hoofcuff can stay the same, since then the end scene with Sam and Dean isn't quite the same....unless I mention that she was the one who called them and she's lecturing them on why it took so darn long
But yeah, Tree Flower is staying as Fluttershy's mom.
Figure I can bring Posey back in another, later story, or at least try and address her by having Fluttershy mention rebuilding communications with her in Harmony's Warriors Assembled, and that she's even arranged a meeting....cue Twilight saying Fluttershy can't leave, and instead has to be aboard the Helicarrier until this all blows over.
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Have you addressed the fact that Cheerilee just appears out of nowhere at the end? I love the Arch Welding going on here, but She needs some foreshadowing.
Aaaaaaaaaand: What if Cheerilee already works for Oscorp? What if that's why She was the person Fluttershy asks to help? OR what if the Hulk formula was created ion the first place by Fluttershy's father WHILE HE WORKED AT OSCORP?
1811835 I tried, the mentions of a 'Doctor Sound Mind' were the original idea (a psychologist), but I decided to change it to a scientist, and forgot to go back and tweak the dialogue.
As for her working at Oscorp, yes, but it isn't immediately relevant to if she's going to help Fluttershy or not. They go to her because she knows a possible solution.
As for if Oscorp had anything to do with the Serum...that's a possibility that hasn't been ruled out, but, it isn't set in stone either.