Tempted by sin

If you are not aware, the story I promised is posted on the site, enjoy and please be honest, I worked so hard on it.

Not My Sins

Comments

[Nodoga]

The description alone had already 5 words I never hear before

[Inferno demon Dash]

1744713 The power of a Thesaurus, your new God

[Nodoga]

1744816
I don´t get it.

[Inferno demon Dash]

1744818 You'll have to look at a Thesaurus, which I used and will use for the story to really understand, true I could do my normal writing but I want this story to be remembered, even if it's not by many readers

[Nodoga]

1744834
Why are we talking about dinosaurs?

[Inferno demon Dash]

1744835 Seriously bro? It's like a book that teaches you different words for one word

[Nodoga]

1744937
Do I have to read the story to understand that?

[Inferno demon Dash]

1744942 I don't think so, but I think you'll enjoy the story anyway

[Nodoga]

1744953
We will see, and I still have no clue why we were talking about dinosaurs. It was like a extreme topic change from the story to dinosaurs.

[Inferno demon Dash]

1744956 Thesaurus is the book I was talking about

[Nodoga]

1744961
Well, if there is a -saurus in the end you can mistake it for a dinosaur.

[Inferno demon Dash]

1744967 Fair point, but that's how it is spelled, here Thesaurus this will aid you in many new stories to come

[Nodoga]

1744975
Sure, if I now bring up the motivation to look up what it is actually about I might consider to use it...for whatever it is goo.

[Inferno demon Dash]

1744982 Trust me, it helps a ton.

[Nodoga]

1744994
We will see about that.

[Author of MADness]

Another dark story"?

[Inferno demon Dash]

1745595 You know me so well

[Author of MADness]

1745736 Maybe not yet dark dude....

[Inferno demon Dash]

1749511 What?