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Aburi


I do a bit of writing when I can, which is not often. I'm also willing to proofread and edit, so don't be afraid to contact me!

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  • 472 weeks
    A technical review of "The Chaotic Touch of Harmony"

    I was waiting a long time for the latest chapters of "The Chaotic Touch of Harmony" by Law Abiding Pony to come out. And when I saw that "Complete" marker on the second arc, I couldn't resist reading the whole thing from the beginning.

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  • 531 weeks
    Looking for a little advice

    Remember that guy you started following for some reason? Yup, I'm still alive - and I need a little advice.

    I have a few story ideas that are bothering me lately. Three to be exact. I think they all have potential, but the thing is, I think they may work well together too.

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    Looking for a long term pre-reader

    I've been getting a writing itch lately, and I've gone and gotten ambitious.

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    I want the climax to have the same feel as this video.

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  • 553 weeks
    The return of the Critic

    Most of my few followers (still can't believe that I have any at all...) follow me because of comments or reviews I have made. So I figure this is the best place for this public announcement:

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  • 612 weeks
    A question for the readers of One Reality

    First things first. I want to extend a heartfelt thank you to all those who are tracking "One Reality"!

    Now to the reason for this post: I have a question. It's time to get into the back story of Amber, Sam and Fero. I have enough ready material for this to be its own chapter, (heck, i could write a book on it!) or I can keep it short and get on with the story.

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Jan
22nd
2014

Looking for a little advice · 12:41am Jan 22nd, 2014

Remember that guy you started following for some reason? Yup, I'm still alive - and I need a little advice.

I have a few story ideas that are bothering me lately. Three to be exact. I think they all have potential, but the thing is, I think they may work well together too.

Idea #1: [adventure] It took a while, but Discord has won the trust and friendship of Ponyville. Lately he has made life much more interesting for the ponies, and they look forward to his next trick. But Discord is not the only ancient spirit, and they want his cruelty back. When they free him from the shackles of kindness he's pissed. But not at the ponies. Not at Celestia or Fluttershy. He's pissed at those who "helped" him; the ones who took away his happiness. And Equestria is stuck in the middle of a war between chaos incarnate and primordial forces of destruction.

Idea #2: [adventure] The Tree of Harmony is powerful, but it draws it's power from other, more primal, forces. Although it was through the filter of harmony, the mane 6 have touched these forces. And once such a connection is made, it is not so easily severed. Our heroines must struggle with the loyalty and treachery of air, the honesty and deceit of earth, the kindness and cruelty of life, the generosity and jealousy of ego, the joy and terror of id, and the chaos of magic unbound. To make matters worse, ancient evils have patiently been waiting; and for the first time in years beyond measure neither chaos nor harmony have champions.

Idea #3: [romance] Spike's growing, and Twilight's researching. The advice of the diarchs, along with her own observations of her assistant, lead Twilight to believe that Spike's aggressive instincts will make it impossible for him to stay in pony society soon after he reaches adolescence. Twilight has a plan though. If Spike gives over control to someone else, they could help him stay in control; allowing him to stay as long as he wants. The problem is that soon he will be to powerful for any but the most violent of chains. So while he is young she offers him a choice, and a collar. [inspired by Inuyasha]I have not decided on who the romantic interest would be - It could be anyone really...

So my problem... I'm pretty sure I can combine any two of these stories comfortably, but I'm worried that all three would be too much.

Thoughts?

~ Aburi

P.S. If anyone likes these ideas, go ahead and use them.

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Comments ( 2 )

Yeah, I see a good crossover. You use the first two in the most obvious way, and then inuyasha the great and powerful violent nature of Spike to kick some ass, and go with Rarity because you know she likes archery. :raritywink:

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one and two have my interest:pinkiehappy:

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