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Jan
22nd
2014

Chapter 2 for On "Time For a Change" is up! · 12:34am Jan 22nd, 2014

So yeah, the title pretty much says it all. Here's the link to chapter 2 A Relatively Productive Meeting, if you get the chance read and leave a comment.

My biggest concern with the story so far is that I'm making Pendulum to much of a jerk. What do you guys think? Is it too much or have I struck the right balance of rude but sympathetic? Also, is the pacing to slow? Any major OOC moments from any characters? This story is my first major use of the Mane 6 so I'd like to know how I'm doing.

Please leave a comment when you get the chance on this or anything of importance that pops into your head.

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