Ultimate Cheat Sheet to Prook's Stories. · 8:56am Jan 10th, 2014
So as many of you know, I have not updated any stories recently. And I first want to give an apology to all those who awaited updates for my stories. I know I let many of you down, and I'm sorry.
As for the status of my stories, I will be unable to continue updates (although, time may tell when I return). However, I want to let you guys see what I had in store for the stories I had posted and written. I'm going to list the stories I wrote, and if any of you are interested, write a comment beginning with the story and ask a question about the plot, fate of the characters, or even on what the hell I was thinking when I wrote it. It would do me a great service if you do :)
-Music to Our Ears
-The Rocking Horse
-Alan Mane
-Rainbow Six: Harmony
Some stories may not be up, but if you're still interested, just leave a comment with your question.
Take care y'all and be safe.
Rocking Horse. Did Vinyl ever make it home? Did she see Octavia again?
1702138
Thank you for that question. Rocking Horse had 15-20 chapters panned out, many plot twists, and a pivotal moment that would grant her the opportunity to return home, but eventually Vinyl would have made it home. Her journey with Dutch changed her greatly though, as well as the torment with Lucius, so the emotional scars would have remained.
Returning to Ponyville would be an emotional experience for her, for she would be burdened by guilt and past demons. Her sudden youthful appearance (considering she could not age) left many bewildered, even to attract the notice of Princess Celestia. But luckily, Octavia would have been there for her, the two embracing each other with astonishment, tears, and alot more. Octavia, being older, would have been married and had a filly, and would have taken Vinyl under her wing. The last chapter would have closed off with Vinyl playing the piano as Octavia and the fully went out for a walk, leaving Vinyl to relive the adventure with Dutch whom she had come to love. :)
1702741 v^Hugs^v thank you, I've been kind of worried I'd never find out. I got attached to your Vinyl, and to Dutch. Happy to know it had a happy ending
1705624
Hahaha I'm sorry I couldn't provide the full thing.
For a dark toned story, it NEEDED a happy ending hahaha
Although, it would not have been entirely happy for everypony...
1702741 A quality ending rarely is, if you ask me…
1713645
Hmm, how so?
1713922 I find the ultra happy, everyone wins endings to be almost cheating. Like they were just kind of like "and everyone was happy, the end, now go away"
1714357
I totally get your point.
Well, since the ending is being discussed, I might as well explain what woul have happened.
Eventually, Dutch and Vinyl would have left the house to move in with Dutch's coworker Twin Twist. This would have been the lighter side of the story where the three began to bond and connect. However, being on the street, and since he had connections to a large gang (Thanatos was a mob leader) Lucius would have discovered Vinyl was alive. That wouod result in the raid of mobsters trying to kill Dutch and Twin Twist in order to take Vinyl. Fortunately no one dues, but Vinyl is taken and tortured by Lucius once more for being deceived and humiliated. Soon, after working his way through loopholes and developing ruthlessness Dutch eventually manages to catch up to Vinyl and Lucius, freeing Vinyl into the open streets. She runs into Dutch's worksite, where Lucius follows in after. He taunts her as she hides, but Dutch is quick and begins to fight Lucius. Dutch tells Vinyl to run as their battle begins to bring the constructed building to the ground. Lucius has the upperhoof though, and is drawing nearer to Vinyl. Seeing no other way, Dutch brings down the support by knocking it down with the help of Vinyl's magic (which suddenly appears). The buulding collapses as the two are crushed under the rubble. Vinyl begins to panic and search through the rubble until she finds Dutch, who is slow and unresponsive. He tells her that she is free, and everything will be okay as he closes his eyes and remains still. Vinyl does not want to leave his sidex and tries to reanimate him, but fails as Twin Twist comes, knowing that Vinyl was not safe. Later, a small burual by an apple tree, far from the city would have taken place fir Dutc. Twin Twist and Vinyl would have talked about Dutch, the city, and the overall future. His final question is 'what next' and her response is 'I'm going home', where she bids her final farewells to Dutch and Twin Twist and walks off to the nearby Train Station. Shortly after the train's departure, Twist would have walked a far distance where he would have met a familiar stalluon. Twist would have asked questions to the stallion discussing the future as well. His final question would have been 'Is this the life you would have wanted?'. The stallion would have replied 'I wanted her to go home...and because of that, she led me home' revealing that it is Dutch, who is still alive, who has left the streets and attempted a new life on the open, sunny plains.
I had a sequel planned after the first story, but...