Jan
5th
2014
HELP MY FOLLOWER!!!! · 3:05am Jan 5th, 2014
I'm gonna be frank with all of you, I have continually been restarting on HWL and CFWM, over and over and freakin' over again. I just CANNOT make the set ups right, and the dialog comes out awkwardly, not to mention I always wind up writing myself into corners.
So I want to ask anyone who's interested a favor, could you, would you, help me over come this writer's block? I can't do it by myself, and I want to start working on other projects, and i know you'd all like to see these sequels I've been promising, so please lone me your ideas, suggestions, etc.
thank you all very much!
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Ambiance Quill · 330 views
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Sure I can help lets see, you need help with your sequel with the Chrysalis fix right?
that and the the one with Soarin' and Spitfire
Ok do you have something so far? or do you need like an idea on how to start?
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frankly I need a starting idea, I want to do something with Twilight Sparkle's Coronation, like I was thinking Ian could be intercepted by Chrysalis some time before, during, or after the ceremony. Furthermore, how would that work, what would she do, I'd hate to go with her knocking him out, I did that before. Tell me what you think
BTW, thank you for your support, I keep getting nothing but grief with this, no one here is any bloody help, except this one other person. once again just, thanks
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Ok lets see, as you explain, Chrysalis will never admitted but depth inside she like being controlled a lot, day after day flashes of that encounter keep popping on her head what its worse all the love she receive has made her army to have more free will. She hates Ian for that, and want revenge.
So she think of a plan to get back at him, but because he now has a better security system she can't take him the same way she did before. That was until she saw an opportunity at the coronation where she disguise as Twilight and capture him again, but instead of bringing him to the hive she plan to humiliate him just as he humiliate her and using the crystal she use on the caves, ruin Twilight coronation and show his humiliation to the entire world, he will not be able to show his face ever again, she will make him the laughing stock of Equestria, just like he did her…but Ian is going to show her why he won, on their encounter, hint hint
Does that help?
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i like this idea, i might tweak it a bit, but I could see it working just fine!
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A perfect oh and maybe if you like I was thinking that also there was a reason she was a virgin, by law a queen must remain pure and only the one she choose to her king can take it. So because Ian take it away she technically has to summit and become his wife and queen but if the king die she can rule alone and find a new candidate, so she needs him to be gone.
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Maybe, we'll just have to see.
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Sweet I can't wait to read it
What about Twilight and Flash Sentry (from Equestria Girls). That combo seems to be picking up popularity.
I can see where Pinkie and Ian might have a fling in the back of Sugar Cube Corner. The whole "you can help me make cupcakes" plot is an overused one, but I think it's kind of a classic one don't you think?
Or mabyeeee... oh! You'll love this. How about Ian and Rainbow Dash? They get into a competition, Ian and Rainbow each begin to formulate what they get to do if he/she wins while the competition is going on. Ian loses, although Rainbow Dash is still impressed that Ian kept up with her. From this she finally gets an idea. A hot, sexy idea...
I don't think Ian and Derpy would be too hard either. Just sit back and watch what happens!
Also, what happened to "Cider Showers"?
I might be able to help you remember the story if you can't find it. 
I remember reading it waaaay back and it's still vivid in my mind. 
Besides the Chrysalis story, I think "Cider Showers" and "Come Fly With Me" were tied as the best ones! 
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thanks a lot for all the suggestions, I'll keep them in mind.
About Apple Cider Showers, I assume you were one of my watchers when I was on FanFiction, It seems that while I was over there, someone copied my story, and posted it here under their name. So, when I tried to post it here, I was almost immediately flagged for "Plagiarizing" it, even though it was mine. Sadly, the story had been deleted from Fanfiction, so I had no proof that it was my story, and had to relinquish it to the other person. Let me tell you I was boiling mad when this all happened, however I've come to terms with it, and have decided to write a new Applejack x Ian fic that will be even better than the last one
Ahhh! Those damn credit stealers!
Sorry that had to happen to you. 
Anyway, thanks for clearing that up. I hope my story ideas were helpful. Can't wait to read the next story you post! I'm so excited! 
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do you still need help with your chapters, or the next one could come up soon?
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still working on it, but college is getting in the way, might still be a while. I'll let you know if I get stuck again
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got it, and its good to see you got rid of your writer block
Any news on the chapter?
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only that college is consuming way more time than I thought it would. I've made good progress, but it's still gonna be a little bit till I can get that chapter out
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let me guess, exams and final tests?
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not yet, but we're getting read for 'em