Pony Age: Catalyst - Coming January 21st

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“I look upon the world now,
Where ponies tread in the mires they have formed.
I see them suffer and hate,
And spread despair and torment to one another.
I weep for my little ponies,
For they know well what they do.”
-Canticle of Coltenidies, 8:45

Coming Soon, January 21

Comments

[keyan88]

This is good.

[RainLight]

You are most likely going to make me to want to play Dragon age again. again xD

[touileasaso]

So tell me, what do you think of Inquisition so far? What are your thoughts?

[The Procrastinator]

Well that's some exciting news, but I do hope you've fixed most of the grammar issues from Pony Age: Origins. I'm only on chapter 16, yet nothing frustrates me more than improper punctuation. For example, you always include a comma before someone's name if you are addressing him or her directly, regardless of whether the statement is a command or question.

Also, when breaking up a line of dialogue, you never capitalize the second part of the sentence (unless it's "I" or somebody's name of course). An example from chapter 15: “Trixie,” Twilight said at last, “Wait here while I gather everypony ..." It should be: “Trixie,” Twilight said at last, “wait here while I gather everypony ..."

Overall, though, I'm enjoying your take on the series. I like how you've entwined the personalities of the ponies and Dragon Age characters, and delved deeper into their motivations. Seriously, Loghain's shift from arrogant to remorseful just before you decide his fate was a blight on the game. His emotional turnabout felt undeserved.

[the other sans]

I await with bated breath

[Toilet Sprinkle]

YES, been really excited for this. I must admit my one dream is for Spike to somehow return considering how tragic his story was in the first.

[Cryo00]

This pleases me...

1663322 This commment ammuses me...
On a side note, I'm having a nerdgasm/annuerism over this almost as much as the new godzilla movie coming out next may
Almst.....