new story!

hello there, i decided to scrap my other story to make a newer, better one. this story is about vinyl and octavia on a cold winters night, octavia asks vinyl about her middle name, as earlier that day she saw vinyl sign her name as "Vinyl M. Scratch" what octavia gets from vinyl is a laugh and the words " my dear octavia that is a long and interesting tale" octavia is understandably confused, as vinyl never was one for stories. vinyl then says, while looking out the window which is half covered in snow, "but then again, it is starting to look like we are going to be in here a while, so you might as well pull up a chair." it is after vinyl says this that the story of vinyl's life before she moved into ponyville, and met the love of her life, octavia, begins to unfold. now this story is my first attempt at a decent enjoyable story to read on a cold winters night, so i would like your honest opinions on the idea, and later the story. goodbye!