• Member Since 24th Nov, 2012
  • offline last seen Oct 12th, 2023

englishwitch


"If you write one story, it may be bad; if you write a hundred, you have the odds in your favor." - Edgar Rice Burroughs

More Blog Posts32

  • 513 weeks
    What I'd like to see in season 5!

    It's going to be about a year of waiting (which is just bullsh*t if you want my opinion), and I dare say the rumour mill will be running long before we get any actual news of MLP-S5.

    Read More

    2 comments · 1,253 views
  • 514 weeks
    Dammit Hasbro

    This is why we can't have nice things.

    Why do they get to copyright the word Brony? they didn't invent it! We invented it, the fans. We should gang together and counter sue for the rights to the word!

    8 comments · 601 views
  • 531 weeks
    New Chapters Coming Soon.

    I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by.
    Douglas Adams

    I've been lax of late, when I wasn't working I was indulging my laziness and wasting my days watching tv or playing Star Trek: Online. Sometimes both together.
    But now I'm ready to get back on the horse, or pony as it were. I want to get back onto my writing.

    Read More

    0 comments · 609 views
  • 538 weeks
    Thoughts on Bats! (episode) *Spoilers*

    I've been coming down had on episodes this season and it seems the majority of the fandom feels the same way.
    But this episode was different. I actually liked it.

    We had an interesting new animal, that actually looks frightening even though it only eats fruit.
    In the past we've seen cute and cuddly bats:

    Read More

    0 comments · 532 views
  • 539 weeks
    Power Ponies - Impressions *Spoilers* (duh!)

    Impressions. Not a review. I just want to write down things that occurred in my brain while watching.

    I don't know what to think of the episode.
    It was entertaining. A classic children's cartoon adventure.
    Cool to see all those crazy super powers and all.

    Flutterhulk was just hilarious to see.

    Read More

    0 comments · 731 views
Dec
15th
2013

Flight to the Finish review *spoilers* (duh) · 1:36pm Dec 15th, 2013

First song of the season and it was great. Only the CMC could make a training montage that cute.
A really low blow on behalf of Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara. That is a new level of bad that they've sunk to. Is there no redeeming feature on those bullies?

Things I liked about the episode:
- A CMC episode, so cuteness galore.
- Rainbow carried the flag for Cloudsdale, showing she got over the disappointment of Cloudsdale not getting the games a lot more than she originally hinted in Games Ponies Play (S3E12)
- That adorable training montage and great song.
- Seeing Snowflake freak out at that butterfly. Just hilarious.
- We saw Scootaloo's room! She has a house, and probably parents. Although I can see the fandom coming up with something like; that's her room at the orphanage.
-The CMC's awesome routine, showing that when they really try not everything has to go wrong for them.
-Miss Harshwhinney being unprofessional.

Things I didn't like:
-Scootaloo didn't fly.
-Where are the families? this is a big, important, moment in the fillies lives and we didn't see one family member smiling, encouraging or cheering them on. they didn't even show up in the background. I checked the crowd at the stadium, not one of the mane six were there (except Rainbow, obviously)
-Scootaloo didn't fly.
- No payback for Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon. They were beyond their usual level of mean and they got no comeuppance. What kind of lesson is that? Bullies can get away with it?
- Scootaloo. Didn't. Fly!
I guessed it was coming. I knew that the writers would just put in a life-lesson about how we're all different, growing a different speeds and some of us can do some things and may never be able to do others, but that's okay because it makes you who you are. It's an important lesson for little ones to learn but C'MON! WE ALL WANTED TO SEE SCOOTALOO FLY! even just a little at the end. You could have made it a life lesson about how hard work and practise pays off, or something like; keep trying and there's nothing you can't do.

Apple Bloom dismissing Scootaloo so readily struck a nerve with me. Seemed against character. When Apple Bloom did it my first thought was "is she trying reverse psychology?" but it turns out NO. She really was just saying "Fine, we don't need you!"
The CMC, who are together in all things, argue but make up quickly, are really splitting over this? It was such an obvious tool that allowed Rainbow Dash to be the one to bring the three of them back together and pass the life-lesson on the Scootaloo. Because why learn a lesson from your friends when it can be passed along by your hero?

Sooner or later the writers are going to have to realise that the CMC are going to have to grow up. Cutie marks, magic, flying, the whole nine yards. Kids are the audience and kids grow learn and change all the time and the CMC are going to have to reflect that.
The little filly is strong enough to drag her friends from one end of Equestria to the other but she's not able to keep herself off the ground for more than a few seconds? Did they ride the whole way? The train couldn't have been that far ahead, surely they just had to catch up. Would have led to a great chase seen if the episode wasn't so short and they had to cut to the finale. 20 minutes just isn't enough time for all the amazingness of the ponies. Would 30 minutes be too long? even 25 might do. You just get the feel that some details get left out.
I wonder what kind of routine Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon came up with. I wanted to see what those two self-obsessed ponies thought would work. I wanted to see them fail so hard.

Rainbow Dash said to Scootaloo that it would be okay if she never learned to fly. You think that means there could be some pegasus ponies out there who can't fly? There's some OC's to write about; pegasus ponies who can't fly.

Overall rating: A strong 8 out of 10
What dragged it down was that obvious going-against-character of the CMC, and that SCOOTALOO DIDN'T FLY!

Report englishwitch · 468 views · Story: Scootaloo's Mother ·
Comments ( 5 )

You could have made it a life lesson about how hard work and practise pays off, or something like; keep trying and there's nothing you can't do.

Which would have been total bullshit.

The issue that this episode set out to tackle is a complicated one, and I think they handled it just about perfectly.

Hard work is important, but there are certain things that you can't reach no matter how hard you try.

This episode doesn't tell us scoots should just accept her lack of ability, it doesn't portrait her as foolish for wanting and trying to fly, but it does point out that sometimes certain things are beyond your reach, and you have to accept that.

It is a realistic lesson, the type of lesson few cartoons will teach and that kids (and grown-ups need).

Furthermore it also teaches a more subtle but also important lesson. That weakness can be turned into strength. Scoots probably developed her scooter ability because she can't fly.

The CMC, who are together in all things, argue but make up quickly, are really splitting over this?

No. Scoots obsession frustrated the other too (especially Apple Bloom) and that caused them to lash out on her. That much is obvious by how easy it was for RD to get them back together. Eventually they would have made up.

Sooner or later the writers are going to have to realise that the CMC are going to have to grow up.

They already have.

Haven't you noticed the parallels with "Show Stoppers"? Almost the same premises. The CMC putting up a show. In the fist they failed spectacularly. Here they succeeded spectacularly.

What changed? The fact that they are growing out of their cutie mark obsession. Whenever they do something trying to earn their cutie marks they always fail spectacularly. When they do something trying to get something done they always succeed (remember the parade float from Bad Seed?). The difference is that when they are trying to earn their cutie marks they force themselves to do things they aren't good at. When they try to do something they focus on their strengths and how best to accomplish their goal. Which is exactly the right path to find their cutie marks.

This emotional growth was further demonstrated by how Tiara's blank flanks comments barely affected them.

You could have made it a life lesson about how hard work and practise pays off, or something like; keep trying and there's nothing you can't do.

So you want them to LIE is what you're saying. Because that's not true. At all.

...actually I was kinda happy that Scoots didn't fly. I think it would have weakened the moral of the episode. Scoots doesn't need to fly to be awesome.

1610078

It's the usual BS that people writing kids shows like to push down kids throats.
And at least it would have let Scoots fly.

I was pretty impressed with this episode considering how well they handled the whole handicapped thing. It was delivered pretty gracefully, not hamfisted and shoved down out throats like I expected,

Login or register to comment