Tomorrow I'm going to proof read it, tidy it a bit, and toss in another gag or two.
It's some more world building, but this marks the start of a solution to the problems - from now on, it'll be less confusion and more heroics! Except for all the villianry. There'll still be plenty of villianry.
Well that sucks... if you had continued I would've liked to invite your fic over to the Sweetie Chronicles... It's your choice my friend, although I don't know what type of comments/messages you got I can still say its a sad thing to lose such a promising story. And for the record, I liked your portrayal of Pinkie Pie. It's a shame, really.
What, really? Whoever is giving you problems is likely just trolling. I found this story rather enjoyable, and was looking forward to more. It's a real shame to end it now, but in the end, it's your call. Best of luck.
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And here come one of most interesting fics....
Oh dammit. This was the first pony fanfic that I really got interested in, too.
so what happend? :S, it was getting interesting :S
Well that sucks... if you had continued I would've liked to invite your fic over to the Sweetie Chronicles... It's your choice my friend, although I don't know what type of comments/messages you got I can still say its a sad thing to lose such a promising story. And for the record, I liked your portrayal of Pinkie Pie. It's a shame, really.
What? NO!
What, really? Whoever is giving you problems is likely just trolling. I found this story rather enjoyable, and was looking forward to more. It's a real shame to end it now, but in the end, it's your call. Best of luck.