Updated "Love Mine" Description · 9:26pm Apr 30th, 2012
Just now took the time to write a (much needed) revision on the description, and I would like everyone's opinion—good and bad, please!
Just now took the time to write a (much needed) revision on the description, and I would like everyone's opinion—good and bad, please!
FURST
ok...
93018
only "ok..."? Is that "better" ok or "worse" ok?
This description is awesome, Zephyrus. I recommend keeping it. I also recommend updating soon, but that's just me.
It's fine, just a grammatical error here: "...while in a world that is now wise the Changelings' tricks and has branded them evil?"
It should read: "...while in a world that is now wise to the Changelings' tricks and has branded them evil?"
93044
Yes, fixed, and thank you!
93034 GOOD