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Rated Potter and the Chamber of Adopted Fanfics · 8:08pm Nov 15th, 2013

Greetings my fellow bronies from around the world! Yup, not soon after did I do my previous adoption blog, I now present my newest one. For those of you who don't know, I like to give ideas out to writers out there to see if they can make something of the ideas. A few of these fics have been adopted in the past (yet to be posted, but in the works) and there are people who actually like them. Some of these ideas are tragic, some serious, other funny, and occasionally a WTF?!.

To see my previous Adoption fic posts please click here, here and here.

If there is a fanfic you wish to adopt either on this blog or another blog I've posted, please message me because it's first come first serve.

Now onto this blogs new idea up for grabs, but a little bit of a stranger starter with this one. One of my watchers, InsanityCorps , asked me to make the first adoption an idea of her own. If there is an idea you want to see adopted for one reason or another, I'd be happy to post them on these adoption blogs.

1) What In The World?

Premise - A janitor that works in a Canterlot college finds some professional looking documents that belong to one of the highest paid psychologists in the school... in his trash bin. He decides to take a look because, hey, the dead don't care if you go digging through their garbage. However, the documents, as well as a letter, turn out to be of a more disturbing nature.

- This idea spawned from me wanting to do a quick analyses of some certain characters and what their breaking points could be. However, the more I looked at it, the more I thought it could be a good fic. I got a list going, but have lost my drive to add more characters and go more in-depth with those that I already have.

- Obviously a very dark story. I have a file on Google Docs with 10 ponies already done to a certain degree and wish to include that with the adoption of the story. What has been written in said doc may be altered to your heart's content. Now the doc I wish to give is right here, but will available for all to see, but only when someone adopts will ownership be transferred.

There you go. Hope someone will adopt this poor, starving story that has been sitting around for about a year.

Sincerely, Insanitycorps

2.) “The Sun Won’t Come Home” (adopted by bahatumay)

Idea Summary: Fifteen years ago, Princess Celestia fought alongside her sister and the Elements against a newly revived Sombra. In the battle, Celestia casted a powerful spells that simply destroyed her and Sombra together. The nation mourned their loss, but Twilight believes her teacher is still alive and after fifteen years she conducts a powerful search spell that transports her to another world, our world.

She manages to find a human that looks like Celestia, at a nice home playing with two children but suddenly she transforms into the teacher she knows, or thought she knew. This Celestia is no longer the princess, nor the raiser of the sun. She is a writer, a wife, and a mother who can now age. And she doesn’t want to go home.

-The idea is that the whole “pony goes to Equestria” has already happened and Twilight is surprised to learn that her mentor is now comfortable with her life on earth. Celestia fell in love with the human that founded her, found a way to blend in, became a children’s fantasy writer based on her home in Equestria, married the human who found her, and has children with him. Because she has no connection to her sun, she’s unable to keep her immortality (Her connection to the sun is the reason for it in my headcannon) and thus she will age and die.

-Twilight arrives (as a pony) and it’s a heartwarming reunion, but Celestia doesn’t want to go back, feeling that she belongs in her new life and that Equestria has managed to adopt to a world where she is gone quickly. Twilight is both hurt and angry at this and tries to convince her mentor to come back, but the problem is Celestia’s new life. How this ends is up to the writer.

3. “The Prince of Crystals" (adopted by Cartoonlover13)

Idea Summary: Shining Armor was comfortable with his life. He was married to his beloved Cadance, was in charge of the army, and was getting ready to have his first foal. However, when Cadance dies during the birth his life changes into a style he’s not use too. Now he is the sole ruler of the Crystal Empire, a widow who has to care of his son, and has to deal with the pressure of politics, especially when in pony society, females usually are the prime rulers of their nations. Can Shining Armor keep it all together and be the ruler he needs to be?

-When you really think about it, if Celestia or Luna or both were to die, Twilight would be the one to take over for them. But if Cadance dies, that leaves Shining Armor in charge. I’ve always figured that females typically are used to be the more influence gender in pony politics mostly due to their rulers usually being female. That isn’t to say males can’t, but they aren’t usually as common or supported. Now comes Shining Armor who, although the prince, was fine running the military part of the government since that’s usually a male job in Pony History. However, he has no choice to but to go into politics.

-The themes based on this would obviously be adjusting to a new position of power, overcoming grief of loss, and sexism. The more powerful female politicians would try their best to see Shining unfit and removed him, but the males, seeing this as a chance for equality, would do their best to help him, especially in the military.

-I imagine that the other three Princesses, especially Twilight, would do their best to support him and how the story goes from there I up to the writer.

4. “Celestia goes to Jail and Does not Pass Go!" (Adopted by The Pink Mugsy)

Idea Summary: Apparently, even Princesses have to pay taxes. Upon being caught for not paying her taxes, Princess Celestia is forced to spend time in a cell with other criminals while her sister and student try to get her out. How will the most powerful being in the land now have to deal with the most criminal beings?

-We have Celestia Hates Tea and Celestia Gets Mugged. We need a Celestia goes to jail. It’s Comedy Gold!

5. “The World Where I Died” (Adopted by IdeyaPony)

Idea Summary: Twilight was prepared for the strangest things when she crossed into the mirror world, even turning into a completely different race. What she didn’t expect was to find exact copies of her friends, who react to her like she is a ghost or in disbelief. Twilight soon fines out why they are in disbelief. The Twilight of this world, their friend, died three years ago.

-This is basing off an Equestria Girls idea where the Twilight in the human world died and that caused the five to separate. The movie can play out the same or even completely different, but Twilight has to deal with the fact that not only is her counterpart dead, but she has to complete her quest looking just like the same person who departed.

-How Human Twilight died and how this changed the characters is all up to the writer. You can be completely original with this as much as possible. Just have that one tidbit used.

6. “Stepsisters” (Adopted by sly6)

Summary:

“My name is Octavia, a young cello player in my high school years. I’m very much into classical music and I hope to graduate with full honors.”

“What’s up! I’m Vinyl Scratch but you can call me DJ Pon3! I’m a cool high school student who’s looking to have fun, play some wubs, and get a little tail action!”

“My father recently has been dating this… DJ which baffles me! He’s a famous cello player with class and style and he’s now interested in this… deviant. I mean she’s nice, granted, but a bit too wild.”

“So my mom, who is totally this kick flank DJ, is dating this cello player from uptown and she’s really into him. Haven’t seen her this happy since the divorce with my old man. And yeah, he’s okay I guess. Boring music tastes, but okay.”

“So she has this daughter who goes to my school…”

“So he has this daughter that goes to my school…”

“… and she’s a total animal.”

“… and she’s okay, if you don’t mind her being uptight all the time.”

“But I’m not worried, I’m sure my father and this mare will just end up breaking up at some point and everything will go back to normal.”

“So he totally like proposed to my mom and now I get a new dad and a sister! This is gonna be sweet!”

-Pretty much Drake and Josh but replace them with Octavia and Vinyl.

7. “The Conversion Bureau: Kindness's Return”

Summary: My name is Fluttershy. Ten years ago, my home, Equestria, arrived in a world with creatures known as humans, a chaotic race filled with so much good and so much evil. I grew to accept them for who they were, despite their flaws, but others I knew didn’t see that. They started a chain of bureaus that turned humans into ponies, under the excuse of helping them. But I learned this was a lie, we were changing them, exterminating them slowly by destroying everything that they were.

I, and many others who saw what I saw, tried to reason this to my friends, to my princesses, but they told me that humanity was a lost cause. I didn’t believe that it was our right to force them to change. I didn’t think what we were doing was right. So I stood up for them. I spoke the truth and exposed the lie, making me the most hated pony in Equestia; a traitor.

The world went to war, I and others who believed in me stood on humanities side and we won ten years ago. Ponies and humans working together to save humanity both from Celestia’s maddness and itself. Peace and unity now reigns, magic and technology are one, solving so many of the problems that once plagued humanity. But all is not well in Equestria, now an occupied country in the name of the UN. The royal sisters are dead, moral is broken among my former home, and there is conflict not seen since the days of the three tribes. I have been called away from my new family to help heal the old wounds that linger. What will Equestria think now that I am returning? What will my friends, who I betrayed for the right reasons, think of me?

-I hate The Conversion Bureau series mostly, occasionally there are a few good ones like Not Alone. And even I get ideas for the series once and awhile.

-In this story, Fluttershy realizes the manipulations of Celestia and finds Humanity to be, while having its own problems, a race with potential and good overall. As an Element of Harmony, she gathers her courage when she learns of humanities supposed fate and speaks up for Humanity, condemns Celestia’a actions, and exposes the truth. After barley making out of Equestria, with help from ponies who agree with her, she lives in the human nations which go to war with Equestria. Fluttershy’s status as an Element and her own courage help her convince some ponies to side with humanity in their war and they soon overcome that famous barrier and find a way to cross over into Equestria as well.

-Equestria falls and the royal sisters are executed for their crimes against humanity. Fluttershy is seen as a hero to humanity and the ponies that support them, but a villain and traitor to Equestria, blaming everything on her. With the threat over, Equestria become occupied by the UN much like Japan was after WWII. Magic and technology are combined and with both kinds working together they are able to help heal most of humanities problems (Hunger, poverity, disease, pollution) proving that humanity and ponies could have worked together in the first place. Plus, thanks to every country united in the war, most of humanity is now at peace with one another.

-Fluttershy is tasked by the UN to help with the occupation and reconstruction of Equestria. By this time, she has married either a pony or a human and has children. Feeling she has to close old wounds, Fluttershy goes back to Equestria not only to help her people, but also try to make peace with those she left for the right reasons aka the Mane 6. The story switches to both the past where Fluttershy stood up for humanity, and the present which is after the downfall of Equestria. How that proceeds is all up to the writer. This is the set-up, the rest is up to them.

-This doesn’t have to be Fluttershy also, it can be another pony.

If you want to adopt any of these (Except for the first one you have to talk to Insanity about that) contact me.

Later

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Comments ( 12 )

So many plot bunnies. Too bad I already have far too many story ideas to possibly ever complete them all too. Honestly, some of these would be fun to see done though, particularly numbers 4 and 5.

I want to write number two!
Eventually.

Hey, I'm new to fanfiction writing so...

I'd like to choose #5 as a starter fic, please.:twilightsmile:

1513821
Okay, hope you saw Equestria Girls. If you need any opinions on anything, like the ideas I had behind it, just let me know.

1513827 I have seen Equestria Girls, but I do have a couple issues with the plot that I plan on tweaking for the fic. Given the guidelines, I shouldn't have too much trouble with this, but I'll keep you posted anyway.

Ciao for now.

1571605
Opps sorry it's because of the shodan avatar

The World Where I Died is similar to a headcannon idea I had a couple of months ago, where pony Sunset killed human Sunset so as to not attract attention to herself, and that human Twilight is home schooled.

This headcannon answers some what if questions I may have had after watching the EG movie. If there are human parallels to the ponies of Equestria, wouldn't there be a human counterpart for Twilight and Sunset as well? And if that's the case, how come we didn't see them? Where were they during the duration of the movie? What purpose would they have if, and when they were introduced?

#7 (Kindness' Return) is an interesting idea. Now I have this mental picture of Fluttershy and Discord setting up some ritual or procedure, and then latter in the fic we have to break out the Elements of Harmony (don't know how I'd justify that with what you set up), and the team consists of two earth ponies, two unicorns, one pegasus, and one human.

I'm not adopting this. (Currently.) I've got enough on my plate. But it's a neat idea.

The Prince Of Crystals, Please.

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