Updates and new story · 6:28pm Oct 23rd, 2013
It's been a long time since I have put any updates on my stories and I am very sorry. Unfortunately I have had a bunch of stuff going on in my life like work and trying to find better paying work. But I am getting back into it I assure you all. However I do need a little help.
You see I have just got a new idea for a story since my long hiatus and it needs a prof-reader/ editor. If there are any who would like to help their are details bellow.
-If you have any knowledge of Warhammer Fantasy it would be a great help.
-As read underline the errors you correct. (this will help me greatly.)
-If you can make the sentence/ paragraph flow better, go for it but be sure to underline.
-Lastly those who want to help will be credited every chapter.
And if anyone is curious what the story is here you go. (The title could still undergo changes.)
Description:
Long since the birth of the Equestria that Twilight and her friends know ,war was common place. Horrifically bloody battles between Dragons, Griffons, Changelings and ponies were an every day occurrence. To have a day with only a few thousand lost would be considered a blessing for any leader. Celestia was not yet born at the time of war but had heard of the stories from her mother. Stories that horrified her and drove her to be the malevolent leader she is.
But those days are long since over. Peace between Equestria and the Dragons Clans, Griffon Empire and even the changelings stands firm. Sure hostilities brush from time to time for any number of reasons but none wish to begin a millennium long war.
But those are just a few of the "Surviving" races of a war long since forgotten. And as many know civilizations are build on the foundations of corpses. But who's?
The Dragon's? Griffons? Changelings? Ponies? Maybe all of them?
Or is it from a race that had long since thought to be extinct? A race that was once the apex race of the planet Equis. One that was so diverse it could rival the diversity of the three pony races. With magic so strong they could have been considered gods. A race that the Griffons thought they had vanquished to secure a flank and continue the fight against the others. But could a race like the Griffons truly defeat such a foe?
As the snow melts into streams and rivers, returning moisture to the land, and sun graces the land with it's warm presence millenniums later their eyes will open. They will once again awaken and take hold of the reigns of destiny after their long slumber. They will once again take up arms and stand tall before the new world. All will hear their roars as they reclaim what is rightfully theirs. The Lizardmen are returning.
But it has been a long time, things have changed... They have changed.
I would like to hear what anyone has to say about the idea, so please post in the comments bellow.
If you need help with something Warhammer Fantasy related then i'll help. I have a pretty good knowledge of most races and i play it loads. I'm also writing my own if you want to give that a read.
1450032 I would love it if you helped me out
! After seeing how well the story fared without any real proof reading I am determined to make it as perfect as I can. If you want to start right away please read over the first chapter and sent me a message on the errors.
I will be in touch.
PS any idea for a better name?
Honestly I don't really have time to proof read, it takes ages and between everything I have on my plate (writing my own story is taking forever) I just don't have the time. I'll help with story arcs and parts of the fantasy fluff since that's just a minute typing at the end of a chapter.
Also remember saurus (if you choose to include them) are extremely violent and stupid. They settle their differences by hitting each other over the head until one of them gives in lol so it'll be interesting to see how you incorporate them in the story.
I'd agree you need a better name but I don't know enough of the story to comment on a new name.