Yo dawg. · 10:38pm Apr 14th, 2012
I herd u like mudkips.
No, seriously though, Ive just spent the last few hours writing this last chapter. And I realized something.
I no longer have the slightest clue what im doing! I mean, I do, but I don't. You know? Its like, you know WHAT you are doing. But not...WHY you are doing it. Weird shit man. Weird shit indeed. Not to mention I somehow put actual fucking plot spoilers in there, which pisses me off. Since I hadent intended that. None the less. I pretty much gave myself questions and answers to my own questions in the form of me talking to myself.
You see why I have no idea what is happening anymore?
I liked the addition of Dawn, she was a character I intended to bring in as one of the humans actually, I had planned a slight escapade with her and Eclipse. But, well that couldn't happen so she was replaced with someone less fun. (AKA Taylor.) Thus the twins were born. They are kind of fun, Apollo is a little BITCH and I want him gone, no offense to anyone who acctually remembers and likes him.
Jennifer is... She is a lot of fun. Slowly wearing her down to minimal resistance and then acceptance of the ponies is..YAY and the fact that she knows the body better then most doctors, well. Yea.
Lets see. Hunter, he is interesting, he already loves ponies, but he didn't want to come to equestria. if not for Taylor, he would have accepted his death. But being twins, she had a bit of sway on him.
Taylor, she is... I don't know WHERE she is headed. As I said she was a replacement for the more fun character Dawn. But either way.
I'm ranting about my characters when I posted this to say.
I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT IS HAPPENING IN MY HEAD RIGHT NOW.
I am guessing voices.
Explosions everywhere but your not looking at them as your a cool guy and cool guys don't look at explosions
The great thing about not knowing what is in 'your' own mind, is that no one else does either!@ Add a good dose of BS and that is a recipe ripe for adventure and good times!
(passes a beer)
70881 *Takes beer, looks at it. Passes it back* Your good, I don't drink, I got some tea though. Ill use that.
70885 fair enough, American beer does suck!
do what?
First Impression: *Oh wait, there's actually spoilers ?! Let me go re-read the latest chapter again*
'its like, you know WHAT you are doing. But not...WHY you are doing it. Weird shit man. Weird shit indeed.' - Happens more than often. In other words you go with the flow, but not knowing if it make sense?
Maybe you could focus on a few main characters, and leave the rest of the characters as sub characters/plots. It might be a case of having the wrong direction. Might be. I don't know. Just a guess.
going slighty insane, Kin?