Looking for a long term pre-reader

I've been getting a writing itch lately, and I've gone and gotten ambitious.

I'm going to try to write an multi-chapter Trixie / Twilight action / adventure inspired by this AMV:

I want the climax to have the same feel as this video.

I already have the outline for the story drafted, and I estimate 12 - 16 chapters. I will not post any until they are all drafted and preferably half finalized, that way the whole thing can be posted on a daily basis.

I'm looking for one or more people to proofread as well as kick around ideas for various scenes.

So... Any takers?

Comments

[JetstreamGW]

Someone actually set a DBZ video to Linkin Park's third or fourth most emo song?

Don't get me wrong, I love the hell out of early Linkin Park, but come on. "Forgotten" worked for the Future Trunks AMV because his world was a bleak dystopia, but otherwise... More bounce, more energy, less whiny... Even if it is Vegeta...

Aaaaaanyway, wacky. Okay. I suppose I can give it a shot. I'm not what you'd call "Experienced" in the proofreading sense, but I am a huge, opinionated douchebag.

[Aburi]

1328941 Thanks! I'll send you a link with the outline