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Aburi


I do a bit of writing when I can, which is not often. I'm also willing to proofread and edit, so don't be afraid to contact me!

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  • 475 weeks
    A technical review of "The Chaotic Touch of Harmony"

    I was waiting a long time for the latest chapters of "The Chaotic Touch of Harmony" by Law Abiding Pony to come out. And when I saw that "Complete" marker on the second arc, I couldn't resist reading the whole thing from the beginning.

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    2 comments · 623 views
  • 534 weeks
    Looking for a little advice

    Remember that guy you started following for some reason? Yup, I'm still alive - and I need a little advice.

    I have a few story ideas that are bothering me lately. Three to be exact. I think they all have potential, but the thing is, I think they may work well together too.

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    2 comments · 613 views
  • 554 weeks
    Looking for a long term pre-reader

    I've been getting a writing itch lately, and I've gone and gotten ambitious.

    I'm going to try to write an multi-chapter Trixie / Twilight action / adventure inspired by this AMV:

    I want the climax to have the same feel as this video.

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    2 comments · 489 views
  • 556 weeks
    The return of the Critic

    Most of my few followers (still can't believe that I have any at all...) follow me because of comments or reviews I have made. So I figure this is the best place for this public announcement:

    I am re-opening my thread in the P, PR, &E Group and taking new stories to pre-read, review, and generally tear to pieces.

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    3 comments · 483 views
  • 615 weeks
    A question for the readers of One Reality

    First things first. I want to extend a heartfelt thank you to all those who are tracking "One Reality"!

    Now to the reason for this post: I have a question. It's time to get into the back story of Amber, Sam and Fero. I have enough ready material for this to be its own chapter, (heck, i could write a book on it!) or I can keep it short and get on with the story.

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Aug
19th
2013

The return of the Critic · 3:47am Aug 19th, 2013

Most of my few followers (still can't believe that I have any at all...) follow me because of comments or reviews I have made. So I figure this is the best place for this public announcement:

I am re-opening my thread in the P, PR, &E Group and taking new stories to pre-read, review, and generally tear to pieces.

If you have, or know of, a story that needs a good beating let me know and I will do my best to assist!

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Comments ( 3 )

Is this still open? There's this story called 'My Life As A Bipedal Quadruped' that I want to see a review of :twilightsheepish:

Seriously though, I had a blog post about cover art for it, and ssokolow brought up some things about it that I hadn't considered. This made it clear that I still might not have a very good grasp of what people think about the story, and I feel like I should if I want it to go in interesting directions, rather than the 'wrong' direction.

So, could you pretend that some unaffiliated stranger came along and asked you to review it? And he didn't hint in any way whether he wanted you to praise it or give it a good spanking? And that the author has no idea that you're reviewing it?

Sorry, but author knowledge or not, I always give honest reviews. :rainbowlaugh:

Sure, I'll put one together. It will take me a bit. I'm away from my computer right now, and a full review it time consuming anyway. But I'll let you know when it's done.

4338551 Awaiting with anticipation and a pinch of trepidation :twilightsheepish:

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