Update: Chapter 2 edits for Beyond the Sky

For those following my story Beyond the Sky I have an update on the next chapter, but more importantly some changes made to the second chapter. In Chapter 3 I expanded the mentality of the griffon elite, and gave characters such as Skyward, and Irene the tendency to quote "ancient texts" of griffon scholars in Latin. I decided on making Latin the ancient language of the griffons because after being created in Greek mythology (which some may notice that I name many of the female griffons with Greek, or Greek inspired names) they persisted as iconic creatures in Roman culture, and during the middle ages because a symbol in the Catholic Church due to the myth portraying Griffons as mating for life.

So anyways, Chapter 3 will likely be up at the end of the week, but if you want to update yourself with how Vice-Admiral Irene and Commodore Skyward talk I have now revised Chapter 2 to reflect this new aspect of their character