CHAPTER THREE IS DONE! · 9:44pm Apr 1st, 2012
Okay the pre-read version is but it's still better then nothing and if my lovable proof-readers help me the chapter will be officially out this weekend!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/14XRNzKgx9-HHOMscSFirrnk5onqbl5b7cnFW5e_6NfE/edit
nice chapter, i really want to know where this story is heading
damn those lightning rods probably kick like a mule. ain't that a kick in the head if you know what i mean
a few typos but nothing major:
when he is hacking out of his first cell, then he is about to hack the second terminal ti says i the. Proceeded... i think you wanted to say i THEN proceeded...
when he loots the armory he finds non-LEGAL rubber ammo, i think you mean non-lethal.
Nice chapter man great work i dont know why but your writing really stands out /)
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Well I'm glad you like it! Most of the typos and errors are the result of iPhone auto-correct.