• Member Since 4th Feb, 2012
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Appledan


Just a military brony who uses his free time to try something new. I would appreciated any help with my work.

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  • 578 weeks
    GOOD NEWS EVERYPON!

    I have begun work on a new fanfic! The first chapter is already in progress and is 400 words in the making, with good prereads!
    Yeah I finally got to Senior Mechanic so I have lots more free time!
    I hope you will like it! Be prepared for The Hunting!

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  • 610 weeks
    Welp

    The OWK finally has a cover, I think I might go back to writing it until I come up with another fic. I'll still try and give it my all and it will polish my style.

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  • 622 weeks
    Okayy.....

    I'm starting to think I should scrap Old World Knights. The idea was nice, I was aiming for a fic that takes place in the world of FoE but has an original plot that doesn't have to do with the game but rather with the world of FoE itself. I noticed though, that my characters are rather inconsistent with themselves (Though maybe it's just me).

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  • 628 weeks
    CHAPTER THREE IS DONE!

    Okay the pre-read version is but it's still better then nothing and if my lovable proof-readers help me the chapter will be officially out this weekend!
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/14XRNzKgx9-HHOMscSFirrnk5onqbl5b7cnFW5e_6NfE/edit

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  • 631 weeks
    Good news everypon!

    I am back from the base and he chapter is nearly done! Prerea version should be up by the end of Saturday!

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Apr
1st
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CHAPTER THREE IS DONE! · 9:44pm Apr 1st, 2012

Okay the pre-read version is but it's still better then nothing and if my lovable proof-readers help me the chapter will be officially out this weekend!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/14XRNzKgx9-HHOMscSFirrnk5onqbl5b7cnFW5e_6NfE/edit

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Comments ( 3 )

nice chapter, i really want to know where this story is heading

damn those lightning rods probably kick like a mule. ain't that a kick in the head :raritywink: if you know what i mean

a few typos but nothing major:

when he is hacking out of his first cell, then he is about to hack the second terminal ti says i the. Proceeded... i think you wanted to say i THEN proceeded...

when he loots the armory he finds non-LEGAL rubber ammo, i think you mean non-lethal.

Nice chapter man great work i dont know why but your writing really stands out /)

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Well I'm glad you like it! Most of the typos and errors are the result of iPhone auto-correct.

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