would you read this story? · 10:18pm Jul 10th, 2013
My story is about Ace Combat crossover. I call it Ace Combat: Fly Hope, The last time I post it I was not thinking srt8 so I just did a mass up job at it, but now I learn and taking slow and making sure the reader enjoy it.
Also this story was the idea of this fic call Ace Combat: The Conversion Bureau, don't worry I asked 1st.
Tag: romance, crossover, adventure, alternate universe, human
Summary draft ( am trying to think of a better one ): When the conversion of every race known of ponykind was removed and turn into them removing any sign of them.
But unknown to the ruler of Equestria and the ponies that lived on the surface in the deep underground of the world the live a group that was free from Equestria rule.
One day Equstria have gone beyond its realm to do the same thing too the humans, but the news of the humans fighting and winning battles bring renew hope. A hope that will bring four brave souls to fight for what was lost.
Here are the main 4 creatures I'll be using one is an OC
Gilda: She lost her family in the war of the conversion of Equstria. Now living in the underground cave tunnle system thx to the diamond dog nations, But now she have noting but anger builded up inside her and wanting revage for what the ponies did to her kind and her family. she'll be flying a MiG-29A Fulcrum
Spike: After the conversion of every race he feel like an outcast wonder why he was the only one life, but one day he find out that he was being use as a slave to the ruler, he have no idea but don't know how to feel about it all. So he try to find a plan to hide or run away before they try anything to hem. He'll be flying an MiG-31 Foxhound
Thunderlane: unknow to the ponies in ponyville but his marefrd, he and his little brother are in fact half changeling, but wean the conversion happen and the changeling attack. He run off to the diamond dog capital to live in the cave system to hope one day he and his little brother can live happy one day up in the surface. He'll be flying an F-5E Tiger II but after same battles he upgard to a F/A-18C Hornet
Growl: The diamond dog that was there in the 1st battle and was the one that help build the now finsh cave system, now in that cave system working as a weapons maker for the resistance gourp. He'll be flying an MiG-21bis Fishbed
I can give you guys a perviwe right now if you ask for it.
Seems... interesting! I can't wait to read it!
1202539 want to see the perviwe?
1202579 Yeah, sure why not?
1202598 The Griffin Kingdom, Big Rock Star
September, 15 1007 A.N. After Nightmare Moon
10:53AM
Inside the kingdom capital name Black Rock Star was filled with life of griffin and anything that can fly. But on this day will mark a time where things was never the same.
Inside the castle of kingdom
The king was sitting on his throne looking over the reports of the kingdom and alley of the land his father left for him before he pass on, He was about to finish off the last report form the diamond dog nations until the door to the throne room open.
The king looked up to see a hippogriff messenger carrying a package in his clew and look winded from what seems a long flight here, He bow his head and then ask “ May I speak king Black Wind of the Griffin Kingdom? “
The king known now as Black Wind said “ You may speak, now what brings you to here today? “ he done singed the last report and put it right next to all the others he have done today.
“ I have a package from the kingdom of Equestria your highness “ he then give it to Black Wind.
Black Wind then told he can leave the throne room and reten back to his job as a messenger for all the nations, he then open the package to see a bottle of purple liquid of some kind. He Also saw a letter from the ruler of Equestria he read it out loud so the guards in the room can also know what the letter and bottle about.
Dear Black Wind
I’ve made a potion that will turn any living beings into a pony, I’ve made this so every living being can understand what real peace and harmony of removing any violence thongs or will to do so will be gone.
Yours truly
Princess Celestia
P.S.
The bottle you have is the potion if you can drink it up and show your people there no need to worry than we can join in this new age of harmony.
He then look up and said “ Something off about this don’t you think Gold Clew? “ he look at his personal bodyguard and family friend of his.
Gold Clew looked at him and said “ Yeah but we have no need to be a pony we are happy the way we are
1202603 Nice. Can't wait for the full story.
1202633 and gusse what that right there is part of the prolong
1202633 ok good news for you it be up in a week or two
1202603 2.bp.blogspot.com/-Pv4Wtx0btIk/UzoBAxFpDII/AAAAAAAACjk/iR5b1NQDgsg/s1600/unoriginal.png
2578882 on so is mario saving a princess
2578885 True, but please try to make a better description. Upon seeing your story summaries coupled with this blog, I noped away. Let's just say...you need a hefty bit of improvement.
2578891 don't worry i did but i just hate it when people dislike a story with out leaving why they did so.
I mean how am going to get better if i never have feed back at all or make better stories if you don't give feed back and beside i put this story on the side and working on better one if you read my currty one right now you can see i've gotten alot better
2578903 Hmm....