looking for an author · 5:43pm Jun 10th, 2013
I need someone to act as a psuedo-ghostwriter of sorts, as in I will give you credit for writing it, but still count it as my story idea/basis and give you the basic storyline, input, and etc.
Here are some edits me and a friend did:
Sure what i was thinking was creating a sort of fist based duskblade kinda character he incorporates his magic into his striking. This will limit his magic and actually increase the intensity of the f
from: bjornicorn, 3d, 18h ago
I am okay with him not having metal skin, and I want him to keep his outfit, because it kicks ass! Also, Should Thunderheade be an heirloom he discovers later, something built for him, or something he
from: Darth Quadro, 3d, 17h ago
not sure lets look into that when we get their. Now what about character flaws you need something to be wrong with your character not seriously wrong but you know like he can't be perfect. Such as may
from: bjornicorn, 3d, 17h ago
I was thinking he could be mildly short tempered and immature
from: Darth Quadro, 3d, 17h ago
Alright cool now you have to keep that in mind every time you write dialogue.
from: bjornicorn, 3d, 17h ago
This is going 2 be veeeery hard... O_O
from: bjornicorn, 3d, 17h ago
I don't suppose you know of a writer in need of a new project, do you? I really do not think I can do this on my own...
from: bjornicorn, 3d, 16h ago
Keep an ear out, pls, or direct me to a group I can ask
from: Darth Quadro, 3d, 17h ago
Darth Quadro:
nah sorry bro
And some stuff was in here:
from: bjornicorn, 5d, 21h ago
"Okay, I admit it, we are lost..."said a put-out Cyndir "How can one forest have this many paths?!? It's a forest for crying out loud!!!" "I think you should go stormy and check the tree tops f
from: bjornicorn, 5d, 15h ago
With the only exception being that I still get to have some input, yes, I am fine on all regards
from: Darth Quadro, 5d, 15h ago
It's your story bro you get to have all the input you just need to be able to take criticism and be willing to make revisions to your ideas if need be. If youd like to get a taste of my more over the
from: bjornicorn, 5d, 14h ago
I can take criticism as long as it is constructive, but if someone starts to just rag on me with no creative input, I will call them out and say that it is not okay for them to do that, and I read it,
from: Darth Quadro, 5d, 14h ago
All my criticism is constructive I try not to be rude but sometimes people need a little 'fuck you' to get them moving. And thanks i appreciate that its kind of just something i write for fun when i w
from: bjornicorn, 5d, 14h ago
I had it be so that the Ifriiti are Physically superior and controll their three elements, but are weakened to the point of helplessness when attacked with their opposing elements
from: bjornicorn, 5d, 14h ago
was the first chapter okay? I worked hard on that with my other co-author and I thought it was really good
from: bjornicorn, 5d, 14h ago
Read his description to know his deal
from: Darth Quadro, 5d, 13h ago
I did read the description and honestly he's superman with magical abilities that's all. You see you've already limited yourself by doing this now if you want a significant enemy he must be fire based
from: bjornicorn, 5d, 13h ago
oh, okay, sorry that your balls must suffer from suction
from: bjornicorn, 5d, 13h ago
Sorry, I suck at writing, I am great at making oc's though!
from: bjornicorn, 5d, 13h ago
I thought that THIS GUY could be his enemy
from: bjornicorn, 5d, 13h ago
T_T I did not mean 4 magic superman... I just wanted a badass storm-monger
from: Darth Quadro, 5d, 12h ago
Don't worry about it bro thats why i want to help you out.... and yes the amount of suction on my balls is terrifying. We will discuss opponents later and i am legitimately impressed with how many oc
from: Darth Quadro, 5d, 12h ago
Also yeah I know what you wanted and dude rookie mistake supreme everybody always wants their character to be the supreme bad ass but the problem is thats not entertaining to anyone but the writer you
from: bjornicorn, 5d, 6h ago
lol, Sorry, I'll try to keep it all on one message from now on, and I play DDO
from: Darth Quadro, 5d, 15h ago
Darth Quadro:
Okay so here's the deal I want you to know is that I'm not here to bash you on your work and I really would like to help you out but I need to know how well you take criticism because if any of this is going to work I'm going to have to recommend a complete overhaul reboot of your entire story. There are a lot of problems with it one of which is your character being OP as fuck like you gave him way to much in general. Oh also as i side note you should know that I curse a lot as well its not directed at you usually its just how i talk. Now I'll be willing to work with you but your going to have to be willing to change a whole hell of a lot. Now of course you can keep the characters and what generally happens in the story and the over arching premise of the story but everything else will most likely have to go. These are my terms, do you accept?
I would love to help, but I am working of 3 projects myself.
However, I do believe I know of someone that may help.
Try contacting N30N-THUND3R or Fire Heart here. I think they may be able to help, but a lot of use are busier now more than ever in the summer. So don't hold you breath I'm not promising anything.
1136235 ok, and a link to each would be nice
1136305
http://www.fimfiction.net/user/N30N-THUND3R
http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Fire+Heart
Ask them and see what they have planed