Amazingly awesome story, I must say. · 4:26am Mar 23rd, 2012
THIS! RIGHT HERE! FUCKING AMAZING! Everyone needs to read it, like...Now. It will blow your minds, through sheer badassery! I feel that need to point out the fact that if trolling was an art form, this is the Mona Lisa. IT IS AMAZING.
OH GAWD I THINK I BLEW UP.
What did I just read?
im unawesome and the fuq was that???
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When they do, it's ...
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mfw
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Sssssoooooooooo.... When's chapter 2 coming out?
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41405 I met your friend. Why is he on more then you HMMMM?! >.>
41771 I'm sexy and I'm reading so I'm just chilling and i don't really talk when I'm reading i need peace when reading not 5 people talking at the same time
41774 Oh, right, I forgot you track like eighty bajillion fictions. You so missed out on the writing of the next chapter of awesome mcsaucepants.
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well more of a surprise when i read the next chapter i have a feeling in one chapter spikes gonna get re-revived and killed yet again and yes i do track to many fictions but there all to good :3
p.s one I'm reading now human got a cutie mark and met whats left of nightmare moon while he was on the run from zombie ponies all i can say is DA FUK
41787 ... Sounds like one of them im helping to write. I have so much shit on my plate lately that im a little overwhelmed...
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overwhelmed...
so how many stories you helping to write by overwhelmed I'm guessing is somewhere between 4 and 7 and then you have yours to write so hmmm
overwhelmed...
41791 About right. Thats why fewer chapters are comin. Its sucks man.
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then set up a schedule to manage all of your stories but remember to put time to plan another schedule in that schedule :3 <--- see what i did there :3
41804 scheduleception? Man, I may have to tell a couple of them to find someone else. I try very, very hard to juggle it all, but... Well, I'm sure you've noticed I took on devil as an editor. He pretty much accepts my basic stories and then makes them better. I give an outline, he polishes.
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I see
also i wasn't referring to scheduleception
but to this schedule
41833 Ah man I know, but nothing EVER goes as planned on earth.
Well what if you had a time machine
that would help
41939 True that...
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Let me guess, it's like a collab? Hmm... then who usually does the finalizing and planning? Are they... long chapters or one shots?
That is, if you don't mind me asking...
42116 most of them are other peoples actual stories, I have a few people who i am 'co-writing' with which can be more aptly described as 'babysitting' and for the most part its all just idea bouncing, spelling and grammar, shit like that, that I need to run over. Most of the projects are their sole respective owners, with me as an addition. And every one of them are books, not one shots. My own story is getting the least of the love .
No worries though, you don't ask for help often, most of your stuff is just asking my opinion, I'm okay with that, its quick, easy, and your spelling and grammar are pretty much already top notch. Still cant wait to read more :P
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Uh, spelling/grammar mistakes can be reduced using a word processing tool. The only things it can't do is detecting misused words in the wrong places. Books as in... more than 10,000 words or something? (Normally short stories are defined as 5k words or less).
*Most of the projects are their sole respective owners, with me as an addition.* >> Do you mean like writing stuff for them + giving ideas too? I wonder who are they....
*My own story is getting the least of the love* >> *Flips through your cover stories, and sees number of likes.* *Doesn't seemed to be the case.* You have like 60+ followers, and that's a big thing. (Or mainly folks believed in you). I mean you were featured by your favorite author, CoalBuck man. Isn't that count for something? Now me on the other hand, er.... I think that's a different story.
You mean the one shot piece I'm writing? One of the few nagging problems left would be figuring out a way to tie the story parts together (and tying loose ends, since I have added another new plot device. (sort of as a test run) Description wise slightly better now. (I think, at least it's okay to me as a first draft. I think. I'm not sure. Have to see where that leads to.) After stitching up here & here, rearranging stuff and rewriting parts, it should be okay to go to 'checking zone'. Spelling/Grammar is the least of my worries. It's the plot that counts. A bad plot puts people to sleep. I'm not sure if mine does. FF.net is indeed a scary place sometimes.
*No worries though, you don't ask for help often, most of your stuff is just asking my opinion* Hmm...... *Thinks for a moment* *Swipes away evil thoughts* I try to come up with something original. But nothing is original. We all borrow thoughts from elsewhere.
Oh and.... I hope you could help me tie up any plot holes if any next time! Big thanks!
'Still cant wait to read more :P' - I give you 5/5 Sweetie Belle's answer. I'm also giving you a head's up, that it might be cliche too.
(You know, it's my first attempt at writing fics, haha.)
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I'm still having problems trying to see AJ's accent & copy her behavior...
It's one thing to have a normal speech, and the other trying to convert to some southern' accent...
42364>>42611 Sorry that reply was typed at 1 in the morning. Anyway, by "Book" I mean stories that aren't one shots these people intend to have many a chapters and stuff, so, whatever! But yea. I give ideas, help write, and fix mistakes, as well as generally pointing out areas that the story gets broken.
My own story is getting the least of MY love. I cant pay it as much attention as I would like because im way too nice of a damn guy.
Honestly, the plot is good to have as a solid piece, but entertaining writing doesn't need a plot. There are plenty of non clopfics. (Plot, get it?) Anyway, yea, for a one shot fic the plot is really only as important as the emotion you are attempting to get the reader to feel. But, im here to help you stitch it together, so we should be able to make some fine piece of art.
As for your issues with AJ/Apple Bloom. I can help, I live in an area that the accent is prominent. So... Yea.