My Girl Fluttershy Rewrites

Hello everypony! I just wanted to make this quick blog to let all of you know that I am currently in the process of rewriting chapters 1-5 of My Girl Fluttershy. Now that my writing has improved, I have gone back and reread my early chapters. After reading them, I am so unhappy with how they turned out that I have decided to completely rewrite them. I think you will find that the chapters now read much smoother and have a better overall quality. Please take a look and let me know what you think. Right now, only chapter one is completed, but I hope to get to the other chapters very soon. I hope you continue to enjoy the story and I will be sending out updates as I get each chapter rewritten.

White Cloud

Comments

[ThatBronyWithTheClipOns]

I liked the early chapters just fine. But I understand the feeling of wanting to rewrite earlier stuff.

[White_Cloud]

1020340

I saw the early chapters as complete rubbish. I want this to be a well written story, and they are very far from well written.

[ThatBronyWithTheClipOns]

1020511 Ok, it's your story. I'll admit there could've been some more details here and there, but when the story was originally just White Cloud trying to talk to Fluttershy I found them cute. I'm just saying I've read plenty of fics on here, and I enjoy your stuff a lot more than some others. Again though, I know the feeling of rewriting things here and there. I may do that at some point with some of my fics, but I'm good for now. I look forward to re-reading the revised chapters. It's an excuse to read something Fluttershy related.