Angelic Disposition, Demonic Editing Work · 6:10pm Apr 15th, 2013
I clicked on the first chapter of Angelic Disposition on a whim and read through it.
I nearly choked when I saw all those errors.
Multiple Speakers in the same paragraph, dialogue/prose faux-pas, pitiable word choice... It was nasty.
I did a quick clean-up just to get my gag reflex down, and will probably do a more in-depth edit job when I finish a certain real-life, time-consuming project.
So, if you want to see how far i've come as an author in the past, eh, six months I guess? Then take a look at chapter 1.